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Dabstep

Dabstep

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2021-07-02 JoinedGlobal
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  • Dabstep
    Dabstep1yr
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    My bad it's not chapter 694 but 619 I am currently, but I wish I could just read more of it

    altalt
    Demon's Virtue
    Fantasy · DiceVR
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  • Dabstep
    Dabstep1yr
    Posted

    First of all I would like to say that I am by no means expert on this sort of literature, But in my opinion it's almost perfect. First of all, writing quality in this novel is almost a 5 star, what I dislike is just some minor detailszfor example almost every smile in this story is "wry" which in general is perfectly fine it's simply too much of it. And of course some spelling errors but that's only natural. Second of all, story development. Up until the "Beach Episode" arc, wchich is about 600 chapter(I think at least, sorry I'm too lazy too actually check) development was almost perfect, but since that moment for a while I have felt like author is trying to include way too many japanise Isekai clichés, wchich didn't happen often before, but I have a feeling that it was just for a moment and it's getting better by now(chapter 694 I currently am). Now that the character development is 5 star will surprise no one that actually read more then 10 first chapter, so I won't write anything about it. I can't say anything about updating stabilty so far, because I reached current chapter just before writing This, but from what I read in the comments it's fair to give it a 5 star as Well. And now the last but not the least, The world background. For me, it was good, but nothing origanl, just japanise Isekai with some changes, so i'd say it's okay, but nothing more. But since author menaged to get so far into the story without any visible mistakes and errors in This aspect for me it's solid 4 star. And that's all from me. Just a simple reminder that I am, by any means not a proffesional critic or anything like This, it's actually my first time writing a review for a novel, so don't take it seriously, I just wanted to say that I (inhale) RECOMMEND THIS NOVEL TO YOU, AND I REALLY ENJOYED READING IT. P.S I you read this far, I want to apologize for all the spelling or grammatical errors I made. I am writing it on a phone with very small screen, and I'm Still learning English, as it is not my native language. So thank you for the time you just probably wasted by reading all of this.

    altalt
    Demon's Virtue
    Fantasy · DiceVR
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  • Dabstep
    Dabstep1yr
    Commented

    This is literally the Best chapter so far, and the ending is Just hilarious, i laughted so loud I woke every one in my house at 1am

    Ch 224 Unexpected Visit
    altalt
    Demon's Virtue
    Fantasy · DiceVR
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