man the story is okay, but the translation is kinda janky.

yeah youve lost me, this novel really.....isnt good

he remembered being hit at the occipital bone? what? its so bizarrely specific and yet totally irrelevant. like you just wanted to force a smart sounding word in. just say he got hit in the head.

very cringe

theres no appeal to this mc, i know its just a video game, but being so immoral and devoid of empathy is gross. i wouldnt even care who he kills if he at least had the decency to feel a shred of guilt, but he just......doesnt care.

his first big decision and he decides to try to kill a child........why?!

this mc is......pretty lame

and how the fuck did he one shot him with a stick? the stats are apparently fucking meaningless. this entire story is a mess.

why author, WHY did you make him so childish? do you think its funny? cause its not, its just cringe.

and that ending is just cringe. the mc just seems like an immature attention whore.

i got baaaaaaaaaaad news for the church guild. your suffering is for alien tv, everything you stand for is a sham.

why does she as a healer not even have a single target heal?

the synopsis does say they all die, so does it really even matter?

sucks knowing theyre all gonna die.

well that sucks.

This author has no idea how to write a coherent story. The world revolves around the mc, and every character, INCLUDING the mc is turned either psychotic or retarded depending on whichever adavnces the sad excuse for a plot. The writing is filled with cliches aand characters talk like robots, its stilted and unnatural. in short, dont read this is youre looking for a good novel.

really author? REALLY? your doing this again? can you please stop overusing stupid cliches, its ruining the novel

and yet more nonsensical cringe cliches. and more her talking like a robot.

i means shes too op to really have physical confrontations, so political and social ones make more sense. watching op people curbstomp over and over gets really boring really fast, but you cant punch racism away if like half the country is racist.

why is she talking like a robot? its so stiff and unnatural sounding.