I really enjoyed reading this and the way the author described the characters. And how imagintive this was, i really ope Edward chooses to accept the quest and make Blake happy again, it'll really make the story amazing. I love how the author is writing in first person it feels like you're Edward and it feels like i'm being teleported into that world but i think you made a mistake in chapter 2 where you wrote 'his happiness was drained and so was his happiness' i don't think you meant to write happiness twice and i hope you noticed that but overall the 2 chapters were really good, i can't wait to read the rest! Keep going!