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Calm_Mountains

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'Those who walk against a destined fate are called Anomalies...' -(Source: Trust me, Bro...) .. . Join my discord for timely updates on my novels. https://discord.com/invite/m87MTRraFD

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  • Calm_Mountains
    Calm_Mountains4h
    Replied to The_Last_Native

    thanks, I am working on improving grammar, will re edit the previous chs in future as a improve slowly

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    Calm_Mountains6h
    Replied to Hardy1j

    nah she ain't one of them

    All members of the death squadron have reduced intelligence, they behave like seven-year-old children.
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    Calm_Mountains6h
    Replied to Hardy1j

    exactly 😂

    The three judges were Shin, Thomas, and a professor named Rovan who teaches about monster anatomy and psychology.
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    Calm_Mountains11h
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    In other words, after casting the basic spell 'Mana shield', Jareth became effectively 'immortal'.
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    Calm_Mountains14h
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    trying out enhanced grammer and paraphrasing, give me your advice on it guys, does this ch seem better than the previous ones?

    Ch 248 Team Battles! Part-6.
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    Calm_Mountains19h
    Replied to William_Tex

    his character image isn't there because no one wanna see him, if you read further you wouldn't want to see him either

    Ch 6 First Event
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    Calm_Mountains19h
    Replied to DaoistYellowBird

    atomic manipulation

    Starting that high-tech 3d printer, he made himself a tea out of thin air. (This world is extremely high-tech...)
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    Calm_Mountains1d
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    The sharp branches had struck the snake's head, coming opposite it with such momentum that the branches blasted off to shrapnel that got into its eyes, further fueling its rage.
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    Calm_Mountains1d
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    *the snake's head jerked off to the left after two sharpened branches successfully hit the inner area of its mouth*

    The snake jerked its head sideways after two branches struck it inside its mouth, hissing in response to the mild pain and umbrage it felt at getting hurt by the measly prey it believed it could swallow in one bite.
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    Calm_Mountains1d
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    *after the first branch, more sharpened branches struck the snake one by one*

    A sharp tree branch launched directly into the open jaws of the snake, making its jaw snap close. Yet another branch struck, and more followed.
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    Calm_Mountains1d
    Commented

    *just when the snake was in one metre away, the young man swung his axe and cut the rope nearby*

    "Gotcha!" the boy exclaimed loudly as the snake reached one meter from him. The boy swung his makeshift axe on his right to cut off a thin thread hidden by the bushes.
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    Calm_Mountains1d
    Commented

    *when the snake saw a smirk of contempt on its prey, it was instantly angered and lunged forward to attack...*

    Yet, all the snake saw was a smirk of contempt on its 'prey' after a while, causing it to hiss in anger as it opened its mouth and rushed forward to swallow the human whole in just one bite using its wide-open jaws.
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    Calm_Mountains1d
    Commented

    *where he had prepared a gift for the snake*

    A sense of relief washed over the boy as he hastened his steps to get the snake to the area where he had made some gifts for the snake.
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    Calm_Mountains1d
    Commented

    *what may seem like petty revenge from others point of view, was something different for the young man*

    In all fairness, the boy could have easily ignored the snake and hunted some weaker beast, yet he was adamant about it. What may seem like petty revenge, but it wasn't...
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    Calm_Mountains1d
    Commented

    shorten it

    He realized from the snake's contempt-filled gaze, void of any caution, that it had been aware of his presence since the beginning. Despite his toes curling in response to the primal fear, he was determined to give it his all and hunt the snake.
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    Calm_Mountains1d
    Commented

    shorten the para into two hardy

    When the boy reached roughly five meters from the snake, the snake immediately raised its head, 1.5 meters high and 2 meters wide. It used its forked tongue to sense the environment and its thermal vision, making it easy to locate the one who dared to disrupt its sleep.
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    Calm_Mountains1d
    Commented

    science! that's rare!

    But how could it work against an ectotherm?
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    Calm_Mountains1d
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    He remembered the first time he saw the snake and how that had almost brought him into the jaws of death… or, in this case, the jaws of the snake.
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    Calm_Mountains1d
    Commented

    didn't need that much extra details for that!

    On a small, isolated island far away from the main continent, where no humans live, a 13-year-old boy sporting dirty black hair filled with mud and wearing torn, dirty clothes laced with dust, dried blood clots, splinters, and unidentified particles was hiding behind a tree.
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    Calm_Mountains1d
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    Prologue: Surviving on an Island
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