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  • B_Spiral
    B_Spiral12d
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    Chills... 🥶

    "The Reinhard Family is under my protection. Harold will retire, and his family shall follow my guidance as vassals in the Temple of Magic. Do what you need to do, but don't cross the line again."
    My Goddess is Good at Pretending
    Fantasy · YuuZu
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    B_Spiral1mth
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    Lovable dork makes a reappearance:

    "I'm now thinking about how we visit Vrelenia. We no longer have a living marker there. What should we do?" Elysia looked down and spoke in a whisper-like voice, trying to find a solution.
    My Goddess is Good at Pretending
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    B_Spiral7mth
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    Several other explosions followed, disrupting their formation. Some immediately became grilled fish on the spot, and others became burnt fish or exploded into minced fish.
    My Goddess is Good at Pretending
    Fantasy · YuuZu
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    B_Spiral8mth
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    "Listen~ everyone knows the remaining foxkin are hiding in a sealed secret realm because they are hunted as a cauldron to improve one's cultivation. The mermaid's fate is more tragic because they are treated as slaves, servants, or even prostitutes from birth. We can use those reasons to cause trouble and gain benefits in the name of justice. No, wait, don't rush to refute me. Listen until the end."
    My Goddess is Good at Pretending
    Fantasy · YuuZu
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    B_Spiral8mth
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    I was about to say- I was already tallying them up. Technically 5- the oldest one is the only one that isn't a twin... quintuplet... If Kitsune becomes more than just a disguise like Lady E was... well then...

    "Wait, my mother also has a twin sister and a divine avatar. Counting myself, there are actually four of us." Miko raised four of her fingers as she mentioned it to her disciples.
    My Goddess is Good at Pretending
    Fantasy · YuuZu
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  • B_Spiral
    B_Spiral9mth
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    The sequel to Instant Transmigration: Goddess of My Imagination. Honestly, there is too much preliminary knowledge needed for this part of the epic, so as someone who completed the original book and is updated to around chapter 190 at the time of reviewing, I would highly recommend anyone wanting to read this story to start back at the beginning in the 1st part of the epic, and grind your way up to this one. I am using the term "epic" because the story has reached that length. This is a sort of "staple" story like how One Piece is a staple anime you can always come back to. Updates are daily and committed, so you can count on the author seeing this through.Due to the nature and length of the story, world building is fairly strong. My guess is the only way to improve this is to dive deeper into country's, in-story religion's, species/racial unique idiosyncrasies (as random examples: a country's unique traits like having a massive bottomless pit in its center with some history behind it, being at war with another country, preferring fist fighters over weapon users, and having it's main businesses being mining, gym bodybuilding and training, and wrestling; religions whose god forbids fishing, the DJ god who has his followers beatbox during prayer, wear togas, and encourages having pets and creating music; and a butterfly or capybara beastman or slime, boulder, or banana dryad race with whatever weirdness they bring to the table.) Thats's the kind of craziness, but unique world building that could spice things up further. Some of it might be too far, but the point is: creating unique settings and people might help in creating interesting worlds, situations, and conflicts. *this is just a suggestion. World building otherwise accomplishes what it needs to for the story if those kind of unique settings would be too distracting.Now for my take on the story thus far:-First of all, having read through the 1st portion of the epic, the author's writing style has improved and continues to do so. If you've read the last book and this one and paid attention, you'll absolutely have noticed questions left unanswered and subtle hints towards future chapters; some resolved, some not. From me to another fellow reader, don't be disheartened, I have personally held on from update to update and I promise you, unless something is very minute, it is likely not forgotten and will be addressed at some point. I do not intend to spoil anything, but in order to discuss some "meta" parts of the story, I will have to hint at "if you know, you know" type spoilers from this point on. *Side note: Please join the author's discord.- A weakness in part 1 that had been addressed even before this book, the characterization of the main characters of the story, has been steadily improved upon in this book. There are A LOT of secondary characters in this story. And I mean A LOT. This leads to less time to address and develop each of these secondary characters, else risking stagnating the plot of overshadowing the main characters.The characters also tend to gather around the main character, for obvious reasons, but at times, it leads to hindering them from taking control of their lives, accomplishing personal goals, improving themselves, solving their own problems, training, etc because they follow the main character who dictates the plot. By the setup of this story and in general, I can see this has been addressed or at least is being balanced, as difficult as it is to do. We can see the characters developing their personalities, mindsets, ideals, and unique problems as they were forcefully separated from the main character. They are "growing up" and handle things in their own way.- What I've also noticed in the overall story thus far is an improvement in the "by the book" feeling the story feels at times. The recurring characters definitely have earned a level of prestige, and can act upon it. A lot of the time, characters have an air of "appropriateness" and knowledge and wisdom, however... they also slip up from time to time and have to play situations by ear! Characters from time to time, trip up, make mistakes, display their own unique quirks when doing/reacting to things. It makes the characters seem more "human" as well as providing a lighthearted breath or comedic moment in normal moments and a break between serious moments. (the main character is kind of a dork at times and completely misreads social situations and queues at times, while at other times is spot on and knows more than others think.) The frequency of moments like these has improved over the story and I hope to see more of them.As of now, around chapter 200, this part of the epic is, I would guess, still in it's prologue stages in exploring the new world, bringing the part 1 characters back together, and setting up for the next conflict(s).There's probably more to talk about, but I'll leave it here and challenge our author and main character to reach even further into the depths of their imaginations.

    My Goddess is Good at Pretending
    Fantasy · YuuZu
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  • B_Spiral
    B_Spiral9mth
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    These faction leaders must have a weird understanding of secret realms or their own secret realms must be significantly less important than what they believe they're sending representatives to try to enter. From what I'm understanding about how the story sets up what secret realms are, it's DEEPLY personal to an individual; you could know and trust someone for years and still not be allowed in. Or maybe that's just a deity's secret realm? Either way, it's more personal than an acquaintance asking to enter your house. These guys must just find/create portals to other realms, claim the portal, and call it a "secret" because no one in the outside world can enter it unless allowed through the original portal or they somehow find/create a portal to that same realm's coordinates. That's the only sense I can think of rn.

    Ch 190 The Incoming Visitors
    My Goddess is Good at Pretending
    Fantasy · YuuZu
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  • B_Spiral
    B_Spiral9mth
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    You know with all of Ely's weirdness with occasional "Plushy Power Saving Mode", monthly internal energy chaos, and overheating in stasis after receiving a big power up among other things, I wonder if Yuuki, Sylvia, and Evelyn have noticed any other weirdness from her between themselves? No way they haven't at least had a laugh about random plushy shenanigans happening if they've seen it and knows it's her. Seeing her plushie randomly appearing, someone messing with it, then acting like it never happened.

    Yuuki, Sylvia, Evelyn, Kirara, and Zi Xuan excused themselves. They would escort Ely and ensure Ely's safety from the shadows.
    My Goddess is Good at Pretending
    Fantasy · YuuZu
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    B_Spiral10mth
    Commented

    It's game time, ladies and gentlemen...

    Ch 162 Short Message in Stream of Memory
    My Goddess is Good at Pretending
    Fantasy · YuuZu
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  • B_Spiral
    B_Spiral10mth
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    There's more resurrected evil and demon gods than neutral or good gods. unless those guys are all in the upper realm doing politics. You'd think they'd know the planet is serving up malicious deities left and right off grill like McDonald's.

    "The red demon recently attacked three small towns and five villages. We have no property or connections there, but we have sent some intel to investigate. We suspect this demon is a newly resurrected Demon God or an Evil God's reincarnation." Gabriella expressed her concern.
    My Goddess is Good at Pretending
    Fantasy · YuuZu
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    B_Spiral10mth
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    "Hey, I'm a good devil." Sylvia couldn't help but argue.
    My Goddess is Good at Pretending
    Fantasy · YuuZu
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  • B_Spiral
    B_Spiral10mth
    Replied to Ata08

    Some unsealed beings just be like that...

    The purple demon looked up and widened his eyes. A 10th Rank gigantic black dragon floated in the air, and several powerful entities stood on that dragon's head.
    My Goddess is Good at Pretending
    Fantasy · YuuZu
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  • B_Spiral
    B_Spiral11mth
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    Am I the only one that feels a little weird that Elena hasn't been present in any shape or form for so long? It's obvious why, but still, she was always THERE you know?

    Ch 94 Ancient Demon's Territory
    My Goddess is Good at Pretending
    Fantasy · YuuZu
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  • B_Spiral
    B_Spiral1yr
    Replied to timothyfg6

    I doubt it disappears. Every ability has a cost otherwise healers could just run revive trains; especially certain broken characters with massive MP/VIT pools. Unless we wanna go full Gurren Lagann and defy the laws of conservation of energy/mass and entropy. And even that would bring its own problems. Best to keep it limited at least for now to avoid zombie army blitz tactics.

    She would not sacrifice her VIT and do charity every time. Healing magic was scary and deadly skill, after all. Her lifespan would be dry if she became that kind of naive saintess.
    My Goddess is Good at Pretending
    Fantasy · YuuZu
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    B_Spiral1yr
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    "Fine, fine, fine, the moment I learned about the dead forest, it's a great dangerous place with string monsters and effortlessly easy place to die, you know. Well, that is in the past. Right now, it's the best place to get my level up and test out my invisible mana." I said, scratching my cheek.
    The Tale Of Kitsuna
    Fantasy · TheRealSkollie
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    B_Spiral1yr
    Commented

    forgot about her. No magic seals this time?

    'OK. Gaia seems to have a few things we need to know immediately.' Elena left the Elysian Realm and met Gaia to exchange information. Erina knew very little, and this Earth Mother was omniscient.
    Quick Transmigration: Goddess Of My Imagination
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    B_Spiral1yr
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    one time when Alisha was still herself and appeared like a ghost in Elysia's memory realm, didn't she make Elysia promise to revive her and her parents? I mean, she can grant one, but the saga with the dead spirit tiger's souls eliminates the option of bringing Alisha's parents back.

    Ch 943 Sea of Memories
    Quick Transmigration: Goddess Of My Imagination
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  • B_Spiral
    B_Spiral1yr
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    it's finally time. especially since the whole trinity is going this time; Elena usually skips training. maybe now she'll pull out those infinite magic affinities, level up from apprentice mage, learn temporary fusion, or pull out the potential from that unique imagination magic? everyone's gonna come out a little battle hardened! 3.5 real-time days deadline X 500 time rate speed up = 1,750 days or 4.79 years of training. Wonder if they're going to age in there or not?

    Ch 941 Time Chamber
    Quick Transmigration: Goddess Of My Imagination
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  • B_Spiral
    B_Spiral1yr
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    thank goodness. the way they've been talking for the last few chapters, I thought this fusion plan would make things A LOT more complicated.

    'Nothing in particular, but it can't last forever. The fusion will be forcibly deactivated when you reaches your limit. I will be thrown out by then. Wait, I need to think of something for my main body. Ely, please revoke our fusion now. I think you've seen the strength of what we call bond power, fufu~' Lifa chuckled proudly.
    Quick Transmigration: Goddess Of My Imagination
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  • B_Spiral
    B_Spiral1yr
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    what's safe and peaceful about Earth that has gods playing games with human's lives for entertainment and this world that's about to enter its second Armageddon with curse creatures and curse gods that can directly attack your soul?

    "I have my reasons, and now maybe I can talk about it. Do you still want to know even though we've been warned? He wants you to live happily in a world that is quite safe and peaceful. He doesn't want you to return to your roots." Lifa asked with a solemn expression.
    Quick Transmigration: Goddess Of My Imagination
    Fantasy · YuuZu
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