The fish after inhaling air

I think you mean eyes as dark as their fur istead of eyes as darks as their eyes.

I would change amateur runner to beginner runner. As he is basiscly already a runner.

thanks for the chapter!

thanks for the interesting chapter!

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the great chapter!

Thanks for the chapter!

thanks for the great chapter! You can really feel the panic and seriousness in the battle.

the chapter is double, you already have al this infk in ch. 4

I couldn't find any mistakes. Looks like a great chapter

Thanks for the chapter!Keep it up! This my favorite book on here together with your other book!

thank you for the wonderfull chapter!

thanks for the great chapter

thanks for the interesting chapter!

thanks for the great chapter, i can't eait to see the how the battle will unfold. keeo up the good work!!!!!

when are the new chapters coming?

Thanks for the chapter!

thanks for the great chapter

Thanks to the great chapter!