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  • Freaxx101
    Freaxx10121h
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    Can u please just add harem that clearly benefit mc or at least not useless, like maybe have special body, high comprehension of dao, high talent/smart/cunning, or even have strong background. Because i saw a lot story with harem so frustrating getting women like pokemon, the worst part is the girl became liability to mc.

    Ch 19 Announcement(Not dropped)
    Heavenly Great Emperor(Martial peak Fanfic)
    Anime & Comics · Evillangal389
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  • Freaxx101
    Freaxx1012d
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    maybe just add women with real potential either their special body, comprehension dao, or strong background. Cause i see a lot useless girl add to harem just they do nothing to help mc and be liability to him.

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    Martial Peak: Chaos Dragon Emperor
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  • Freaxx101
    Freaxx1012d
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    Martial Peak: Chaos Dragon Emperor
    Anime & Comics · Chaos_DragonKnight
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    Freaxx1012d
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    Martial Peak: Chaos Dragon Emperor
    Anime & Comics · Chaos_DragonKnight
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  • Freaxx101
    Freaxx1015d
    Posted

    i like the story, can wait when he start building his kingdom

    Competent Poseidon
    Anime & Comics · DaoistqZxYMH
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  • Freaxx101
    Freaxx1016d
    Posted

    i like it, it has a lot potential.

    Lord of the Mysteries:The King of Nothing
    Anime & Comics · Takanome_7
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  • Freaxx101
    Freaxx10123d
    Commented

    can u make similiar system kind world like author pov/novel extra

    Reborn a Dragon in fantasy world <Kingdom building and sex>
    Shadow Monarch: Multiverse Ascendance
    Anime & Comics · GodOfGreedAs
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  • Freaxx101
    Freaxx10129d
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    i love world buildingg, do more often please thank for the chapter

    (For those interested in the kingdom-building aspect, I hope you enjoy it, and for those who aren't, feel free to skip until the next part after the — — — It wasn't something I explored too much originally, but I really enjoyed writing this chapter so there probably will be more like it here and there. Let me know what you think.
    I am Rimuru Tempest (Rewrite Version)
    Anime & Comics · BonVoyage
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  • Freaxx101
    Freaxx10129d
    Posted

    interesting combination, i like the character bg and development

    Red Nara
    Anime & Comics · l_legolas
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  • Freaxx101
    Freaxx1011mth
    Commented

    i personally enjoy it a lot, just continue bro thanks for the update.

    Guys, I need your honest review about my story that I've been writing and you are reading. Lately, I've been getting the feeling that maybe it's not connecting with you and you are not enjoying it. I want to know if that's the case. Are there specific aspects you don't enjoy? Is there something you think could be improved? Should I consider discontinuing it altogether?
    Tensura: Primordial Silver to True Dragon - The Tale of Rimuru Tempest
    Anime & Comics · God_RimuruTempest
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  • Freaxx101
    Freaxx1011mth
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    Just make it completely AU, if u want to have some connection to canon, just take bigger event.

    Ch 44 On Pause
    One Piece: I Just Want A Family
    Anime & Comics · Yardigan
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  • Freaxx101
    Freaxx1011mth
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    with OP mc u need a lot goals to achive, make some kind list of his objective like for example in order to protect his family he need to be strong, but he can't never be there for them, so he make his own force that can cover him up, etc

    Alright.... I need some help , I got somewhat carried away in my writing and made the MC a tad bit too strong...
    the oath of a father Beyond the Veil: A Naruto Reincarnation
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  • Freaxx101
    Freaxx1011mth
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    Wheres the update author, can u make stable update please. It’s really fresh story, not a lot people try hamura descendant as background chatacter. It has a lot potential especially tenseigan and shikotsumyaku not a lot discovered in movie. Can u make it somehow he can increase his bloodline purity to 100% or even break limit that, i love to see what will happen.

    Reborn as Kaguya’s Descendant
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  • Freaxx101
    Freaxx1011mth
    Commented

    is he gonna be build his own force or became kage himself? u know try to improve his village to fight otsutsuki later on

    Ch 16 Rally (2)
    Reborn as Kaguya’s Descendant
    Anime & Comics · Rowan_Wild
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  • Freaxx101
    Freaxx1011mth
    Posted

    idk what to say man, simply marvelous story right here. I like how each character decribe especially tsunade and mc. Don't forget how well u make other pov, it's certainly make the story more interesting. It's not how many fanfic only focus on its mc and i feel that kind of story always to rigid u know, with u describe other pov, it make it seem more open and free. TFTC bro, hope u make more update

    Naruto : Shadows of Resurgence
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  • Freaxx101
    Freaxx1011mth
    Replied to Freaxx101

    maybe u can also add otsutsuki arc like in fanfic Naruto: since ancient time

    (A: I'm sorry. Sometimes I lack motivation and sometimes I lack ideas. If you have a good idea, please let me know. Also, do you think I should kill Obito?]
    I am Yhwach
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  • Freaxx101
    Freaxx1011mth
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    i have suggestion, maybe try yo build his secret force like wandenreich in bleach or akatsuki/kara. Well because he is to strong it will easily became boring, so for most part of his plan just order his subordinate and only for interesting thing he act himself like for example zero tail arc, akatsuki, the box of bliss, moryo, otsutsuki, kara.

    (A: I'm sorry. Sometimes I lack motivation and sometimes I lack ideas. If you have a good idea, please let me know. Also, do you think I should kill Obito?]
    I am Yhwach
    Anime & Comics · eternal_angel12
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  • Freaxx101
    Freaxx1011mth
    Commented

    can he at least use fuinjutsu

    Ch 7 Chakra Affinity Dilemma
    Reborn in Uzushiogakure with template System
    Anime & Comics · bhautik_trambadia
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  • Freaxx101
    Freaxx1011mth
    Commented

    small arc will be nice

    Avatar (blue monkey people)
    Lord of the Seas (rewrite)
    Video Games · Some_creative_name
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  • Freaxx101
    Freaxx1011mth
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    With his high level comprehension he can combine all

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    Reborn as Namikaze Minato (Self Insert)
    Anime & Comics · Sanchit_8078
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