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deku05012yrReplied to dsam39You have a point , it would be a cliche if there is not much of relationship building between the 2 and the girl falls head over heels for him outta nowhere. There was anice buildup for celine.Amazing character building, sad past, goals in life, etc etc. but there was not much of a story till now between him and others except wendy could be his past wife too.
Ch 429 Choices Where Millions Of Lives Were At Stake- deku05012yrCommented
So, Sidonie is no different than Lionel , she acts the same way for William as Lionel does for her and she sees him with utter disdain. The chapters are making her look more and more pathetic, Priscilla' character is 100 times better. The constant repetition of making babies is making this great novel lose track of it originally was đ, making another novel where MC is getting everything he wants out of thin air , jade beauties falling down from skies ....etc
Morgana, who was looking through Sidonie's eyes, was half tempted to take over her other half's body, and order the Elves to knock William unconscious, so that she could tie him up on her bed. - deku05012yrCommented
of courseđ
"No, Master," William once again shook his head. "If we do that, we will lose any chance of reaching an agreement with her. Also, that will not make us any different from The Organization who tried to kidnap Big Brother Matthew and Eve, in an attempt to use them as leverage. I don't approve of this plan." - deku05012yrCommented
Go Celine and Kasoganaga, burn every last one of the elves to the ground. I bet William would wimp out from touching this princess coz she is innocent and her mother's disciple and somehow add her to the harem ( that grey haired william had one elf in his life, could be this particular elf )
Ch 435 Stabbing A Tender Heart - deku05012yrCommented
Lol, I wish we would come to know that there is a demigod in Lont
They were Deus' best Infiltration Agents that could practically go anywhere because they had mastered being one with the Earth. Floyd believed that if any of them wanted to escape, no one in the small town of Lont could stop them. - deku05012yrCommented
F for eve and children of the orphanage
William sighed and patted Brianna's head. He just couldn't help but feel playful whenever he was around Brianna. For William, Brianna was the closest to the little sister that he never had. - deku05012yrCommentedCh 351 Give Me Your Babies
- deku05012yrCommentedCh 291 Duty Calls And The Enemy Awaits!
- deku05012yrReplied to ElyonCh 276 Conquest Of The Southern Continent
- deku05012yrCommentedCh 290 Are You Also In Love With Will?
- deku05012yrCommented
it's not thrilling to foreshadowing every chapter ,building up and building up would lead to even more disappointment if not executed properly
This paragraph has been deleted. - deku05012yrPosted
The main character is likeable, kinda dumb at times bit that's perfect for 16 year old , it would be irritating if he would be too smart or ruthless. But the pacing is getting slower and slower , the side characters are also being beautifully developed, the system is too omniscient though, I had only one issue with it that the pacing is too slow , it been more than 100+ chapters but it hasn't even been a week in the novel , the length of the updates are too short and it's only one chapter a day or two , seriously dusturbs the flpw of the reader
- deku05012yrCommentedCh 145 Looked Down by a Summon
- deku05012yrCommentedCh 141 Killing Delo
- deku05012yrCommentedCh 145 Will Imprint, Soul Quirk and Rule fragments.
- deku05012yrCommentedCh 47 Linus konzer vs Athan in Black Dragon Suit