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WordWarden0

WordWarden0

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Trying my hand at sci-fi, war, and romance novels. I’ll take any feedback on any of my work so far. And dark novels. Oh boy, are we going into dark fantasy, my fellow Edge lords. Mwhahahaha

2021-06-23 JoinedUnited States
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  • WordWarden0
    WordWarden04mth
    Commented

    Nice metaphor 👍

    "I don't care if you sound like a rat being fried on a grill, get in there. Now." Makoto sat back down at the chair in front of the sound board and flicked his fingers toward the door to the recording booth.
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    Your Paradise: Listen To My Song
    Teen · Thalia_Ilace
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  • WordWarden0
    WordWarden04mth
    Commented

    I really, really, realllyyy don’t like her friends

    Juri claimed that she just assumed that Minami would be busy with group preparations since she was the group leader and didn't want to put pressure on her to stop organizing things.
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    Your Paradise: Listen To My Song
    Teen · Thalia_Ilace
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  • WordWarden0
    WordWarden04mth
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    [Akina] "Why are you guys so upset about it though? On your videos, no one has ever commented about Minami at all. Or are you just removing comments that mention her? If you're not, then no one is mentioning her, what's wrong with some people saying she's their favorite?? You can be a favorite and get attention but she can't? Why? She already said she's sorry. Besides, even though you put line distribution and order of appearance, it IS hard to tell sometimes. Otherwise people wouldn't comment with time stamps asking who's singing. So let's all move on from this. Let's start a new conversation!"
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    Your Paradise: Listen To My Song
    Teen · Thalia_Ilace
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  • WordWarden0
    WordWarden04mth
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    [Juri] "I was going to keep quiet about it, but I decided not to. It was extremely inappropriate of you to even ask anyone that. Ever. The thing is, you knew they'd pick you because they were pressured into it, and you just wanted to use it to try and rub our noses in it. Because, like Saki said, the line distribution is in the description so they 100% knew who was singing what and knew which one you were. So stop trying to act innocent now and pretend like you didn't know when it's really obvious that you knew the whole time. You're just trying to act like everyone likes you and honestly, they don't. No one ever comments about you. For a reason."
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    Your Paradise: Listen To My Song
    Teen · Thalia_Ilace
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  • WordWarden0
    WordWarden04mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 1 Ch 01: The Audition
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    Your Paradise: Listen To My Song
    Teen · Thalia_Ilace
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  • WordWarden0
    WordWarden04mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 1 Ch 01: The Audition
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    Your Paradise: Listen To My Song
    Teen · Thalia_Ilace
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  • WordWarden0
    WordWarden04mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

    Ch 1 Ch 01: The Audition
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    Your Paradise: Listen To My Song
    Teen · Thalia_Ilace
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  • WordWarden0
    WordWarden04mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 1 Ch 01: The Audition
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    Your Paradise: Listen To My Song
    Teen · Thalia_Ilace
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  • WordWarden0
    WordWarden04mth
    Commented

    Juri, you evil-

    "Well, Saki's already pretty much done with it, just do this one and we'll do another one later. It's not like it's going on the 'official account' right? So who cares?"
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    Your Paradise: Listen To My Song
    Teen · Thalia_Ilace
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  • WordWarden0
    WordWarden04mth
    Commented

    Ah, yes. The challenger… wait one moment. Just one moment…

    Juri made a disgusted face and put a finger in her ear that was closest to Minami.
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    Your Paradise: Listen To My Song
    Teen · Thalia_Ilace
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  • WordWarden0
    WordWarden04mth
    Commented
    Ch 2 Ch 02: Entering The Group
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    Your Paradise: Listen To My Song
    Teen · Thalia_Ilace
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  • WordWarden0
    WordWarden04mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 1 Ch 01: The Audition
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    Your Paradise: Listen To My Song
    Teen · Thalia_Ilace
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  • WordWarden0
    WordWarden04mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 1 Ch 01: The Audition
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    Your Paradise: Listen To My Song
    Teen · Thalia_Ilace
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  • WordWarden0
    WordWarden04mth
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 1 Ch 01: The Audition
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    Your Paradise: Listen To My Song
    Teen · Thalia_Ilace
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  • WordWarden0
    WordWarden04mth
    Commented

    Not my usual cup of tea but surprisingly intriguing. Great start as well, with an amazing ending that leaves you wanting more. Good stuff right here!

    Ch 1 Ch 01: The Audition
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    Your Paradise: Listen To My Song
    Teen · Thalia_Ilace
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  • WordWarden0
    WordWarden04mth
    Commented
    She added in various winks and waves, interacting with the pretend crowd, and twists on certain moves to make them unique to her performance.
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    Your Paradise: Listen To My Song
    Teen · Thalia_Ilace
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  • WordWarden0
    WordWarden04mth
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

    Ch 1 Ch 01: The Audition
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    Your Paradise: Listen To My Song
    Teen · Thalia_Ilace
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  • WordWarden0
    WordWarden01yr
    Commented

    And you’re fighting a losing battle. And when she ends up saving your family, you won’t be saying anything then.

    "She's running away," one said. "I can't fucking believe it." 
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    Moonlight Demon (GL LITRPG)
    LGBT+ · Already_In_Use
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  • WordWarden0
    WordWarden01yr
    Commented

    Holy, indeed

    That's...  Ash took a deep breath.  Holy shit. 
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    Moonlight Demon (GL LITRPG)
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  • WordWarden0
    WordWarden01yr
    Replied to DargonSlare
    "Of course, not. I live to fight," Akiven shrugged. "If I go out, it is what it is." 
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    Moonlight Demon (GL LITRPG)
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