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Yeah, this is actually the the fanfic of the Witcher and Skyrim(I think… it was labelled as such) it is available on different platforms in the name: the Witcher: the devine hunter. The novel is complete with around 600 chapters. I think the author made some mistake while creating this novel and uploaded another book, but yeah this is not a Naruto fanfic and it is missing 360 chapters
Skip, you can add start and end of the activity but don’t waste time in writing it out.
OMG.. is that what this stiff writing is? i knew something was different. i would expect this from someone who is giving us only description of the story and i always felt this is not good enough work to call it a novel experience but i didn't expect it to be AI because i have come across few of similar type of novels which have no dialogue, emotion or depth, and i felt it was because they are new to writing and will improve gradually. AI use for writing novels shouldn't exist imo.
OMG... "black hair green eyes" And "hoddie and a thin jacket", you sir are not even trying to be subtle.
SPOILER ALERT!!! SPOILERS ALERT!!! SPOILER ALERT!!! SPOILERS ALERT!!! I don’t understand this part. Is she still the same lux goddess or are you changing this part? I always am a bit skeptical about this part of the story like I would have thought this was one of heroine of memorizer roe smth. So does this mean he has started with contact with goddess and they are just learning that he is the golden constellation? Because I have always been under impression that they knew that he was the golden constellation but it was just that he was like a double edged sword that could even kill them and have power over them (It was like they feared that they would create a 2nd Kim Soohyun so they were thinking of him like the last resort). And also they definitely knew that he has sent something back in time SPOILER ALERT!!! SPOILERS ALERT!!! SPOILER ALERT!!! SPOILERS ALERT!!!
This is a major faulty plot. Like he said he dosent forget anything and that he can remember all the books he has read. He said he wants to prolong the start of the war and now here he forgets how the war starts
Love the fan-fic, continue uploading and completing this book would be my only request to you. My country doesn’t take payment in patreon so if you want to payment to be motivation for you then I would not complain if it is readable behind the WebNovel paywall.
you should try reading some Chinese novels/fanfics this novel is apparently too original and realistic for you to enjoy.
Snape is nerve treated well in translation novels so I am keeping low expectations for this novel
you can understand the idea the author had for this scene. like it was a good idea but the execution was a bit flawed. no emotions were there so this looked bland and rushed. but otherwise this was a good enough idea.
I haven't read that fan fic, it has been on my reading list for few months. its just that it is a lengthy fan fic and is still not completely translated. with most of the translated fanfic i only read after its translation is complete or almost near complete.
They have also said about this in wiki for "raido namiashi" ; "During his time serving under the Fourth Hokage, he was taught the Flying Thunder Formation Technique, the seal for which they have marked on the Fifth Hokage, so that they can travel to her at any time."
Actually minato did teach others that technique.
my knowledge on that question: the eyes in his arms are suppressed through seals, but that is still too much chakra use because danzo has Mangekyo Sharingan in his right eye (Shisui's Mangekyo) which consumes even more chakra. but it all makes sence when you assume that danzo is a very OP power level from his training under 2nd Hokage, like he was next level strong compared to 3rd hokage but was only not chosen because he had power hungry personality. so in the end he exchanged the his combat power to gain ability to manipulate people (maybe... i mean isn't that what danzo wanted from shisui?) and that resulted in him loosing a lot of his chakra.
How about “Merlin”. It sounds cliche but it works. But it would stand out with all the other names in the novel
i don't mind you putting this on hold but please i have been waiting for tbate fan fic and i would love a consistent and faster update on the other tbate fanfic