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VIP200111hCommentedSo he forgot the elders are keeping an eye on them?
As he worked, Oliver couldn't shake off the feeling of being watched. The sensation prickled at the back of his neck, raising the hairs on his arms in unease. Glancing around warily, he scanned the surrounding foliage for any signs of movement, but saw nothing out of the ordinary.- VIP200113hCommented
I’m waiting patiently
"Alright, next up we'll be breaking up into positions. Pitchers and Catchers, you'll be with Coach Takashi. Everyone else is with me." - VIP200113hCommented"So, why are you here?" He asked in a disinterested tone.
- VIP20011dCommentedThen the Dragons' magic power that was stored also enters the barrier. It also gets absorbed by the magic letters. The absorption of Dragons' magic power activates Ben's Dragon Force and golden scales appear on his skin, but now they appear all over his body, making him look like a Dragonoid.
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If u can make it longer without change the way and the timing that is currently going
5. Are the chapter sizes to your liking? (Y/N) - VIP20011dCommented
It’s going great
3. The story to move away from canon faster, or slowly deviate? (Y/N/Comment) - VIP20011dCommented
Please no, that is just a mix of confusions
2. Have another franchise in the novel, and if so, what would you choose? (Y/N/Comment) - VIP20011dCommented
No
1. To see the MC have an additional partner later in the novel? (Y/N/Comment) - VIP20012dCommented
Not really, he is only competing with the guys from the same position
They were currently competing for a place on the team, which was why he wasn't expecting such words. - VIP20012dCommentedCh 309 Tryouts Day 2 (1)
- VIP20012dCommentedCh 307 Dauntless (1)
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Author trying to snick in Tojo like we wouldn’t notice
Tojo Hideaki – …. - VIP20013dCommentedThere were many times where Ken tried to interject and suggest that it was time to get some rest, however Kei would just agree with him before continuing his story.
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To be honest that was kinda funny
'I-I almost assaulted an innocent man!' He screamed in his heart. - VIP20013dCommented
Just throw him a 160hm/h fastball It’s hit kill
'Surely he won't do anything to me right?' Ken thought, battling his instincts that told him to run. He had no fighting experience or technique after all, therefore he liked to err on the side of caution. - VIP20014dCommentedWith a hasty goodbye, Gabriel practically bolted out of the diner. Back in his car, he started the engine and sped out of the parking lot. As he drove, one thought echoed in his head: 'Man, drywall is more talkative than her.'
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They wanted a quiet life but they are not around?
'My name is Gabriel Hudson, just turned 17. Mom and Dad decided they wanted a quiet life away from the Hollywood craziness, so they settled us down here. Joke's on them, though - they're never home to even enjoy the peace.' - VIP20014dReplied to AC_adaptor_the_2
If the mc had a chinese name like liu chu or Lin Chen or mao Tao That would be pretty obvious
Unbeknownst to anyone, Kaito was not an ordinary boy. He was, in fact, a time traveler from another world—a world where One Piece was merely a fictional story. His real name was Arthur, a seventeen-year-old boy from the 21st century who had read up to the Egghead Arc of One Piece. After a mysterious accident, Arthur's soul had been transported into the body of Kaito, a member of the D clan, and renamed Sergio D. Arthur. - VIP20014dCommented
Grandpa just spoil what one piece is
Taro placed a reassuring hand on Arthur's shoulder. "Then go, Sergio D. Arthur. Follow your destiny. But remember, it's not just about the knowledge you possess. It's about the journey, the bonds you form, and the person you become along the way." - VIP20014dCommented
First mistake of fanfic transmigration
Arthur hesitated, then decided to confide in the old man. "Grandfather, what if I told you I had knowledge of the future? Of events and people far beyond our island?"