I have read 1300+ chapters .... last chaps just title ..
It keeps me reading .. cause story doesn't get stagnant but
ultimately we know that he becomes almighty ...
but daym the plot armour like " world purifying light " sucks for me .. giving whackk feeling
General suggestions : not saying you committed mistakes ..
plot is boss .. it make reader stay .
plan out story , connect dots, 3/4 description, 1/4 dialogue .. or half half .
never drag, keep simple , keep running
as i see chap title ... i feel ..wth
to accept reality he took whole chap.
reality itself is story where th fk are u going writerrr . i am boree once again