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"The moment were you lost enjoyment is the moment you finally grown up..."

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  • xKiryuu
    xKiryuu23d
    Commented

    am iIthe only one who read it as "Ancient Onee-sama"?

    "I bid you a fond welcome, Ancient One-sama"
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  • xKiryuu
    xKiryuu1mth
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    For the love of god I hate those Y/N story. I can tolerate some and pretty much the rest I can't, would be excited to see how this will go.

    As was requested, I won't follow the original, so many events and interactions would differ, with some OC characters being involved too. (I won't add too many OCs so it won't become a Wattpad-type Y/N story.)
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  • xKiryuu
    xKiryuu1mth
    Commented

    I can already see what will happen in the future

    I shall say another thing, and that would be the fact that Makoto won't be in Emilia's camp nor in the camp of any other royal candidate. Hehe, I don't want to spoil much, so you shall wait for future chaps and men, Fuck this boring arc. I tried to come up with some interesting plot twists and then decided to destroy that shit. I was too blind to follow the canon so much, so I hope you will like the future changes I planned for this fanfiction of mine.
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  • xKiryuu
    xKiryuu1mth
    Commented

    I like it being called "Two Sword Style" instead, and seriously? "Upstairs"?

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  • xKiryuu
    xKiryuu1mth
    Commented

    huh? is this intentional or did you mix up the names?

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  • xKiryuu
    xKiryuu1mth
    Commented

    ok, I really can't immersed myself because of all the things to describe Kuma Ability why did you refer it to 'meatball' of all things. I find it hilarious instead of serious.

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  • xKiryuu
    xKiryuu1mth
    Commented

    20% dmg boost to Nomu's nice

    Zombie Hunter: Increases damage dealt to undead enemies by 20%."
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  • xKiryuu
    xKiryuu1mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter, and congratulations on completing arc 1. Goodluck on Arc 2 🥳

    Ch 4 Chapter 4
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  • xKiryuu
    xKiryuu1mth
    Commented

    tsundere~

    "Hell if I know...This guy is a dummy...w-well a cute dummy but still a dummy! Hmph!"
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  • xKiryuu
    xKiryuu1mth
    Commented

    relief*

    With those words the boy fell unconscious as Emilia started to heal his wounds.
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  • xKiryuu
    xKiryuu1mth
    Commented

    shouldn't it be descended

    'I d-don't know if it will work but if I am really considered as Ultimate Lucky student than please, my luck, help me out in here!'
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  • xKiryuu
    xKiryuu1mth
    Commented

    greeted → gritted

    "I...gh...c-can't allow myself to die in here…" He clenched his fists as greeted his teeth.
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  • xKiryuu
    xKiryuu1mth
    Replied to Jumbo_Ignir

    you shouldn't worry about disappointing us reader's, I might have no experience as a writer but I do have experience on not wanting to disappoint others, as long as you enjoy yourself and be happy I can enjoy your stories.

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: Luck and Return By Death!
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  • xKiryuu
    xKiryuu1mth
    Posted

    This is my first time writing a review so bear with me. Writing style is good, there are some grammar errors but still readable. Update is frequent which I love, a unique crossover between my favorite Animes. I learned my lesson to not expect to much, but I hope this story don't become discontinue or be on hiatus, because the Re;Zero and Danganronpa fandoms are currently dead sadly. Overall if i will rate this it will be a 9.4/10 a good story overall, I HOPE to see how this story turns out.

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  • xKiryuu
    xKiryuu1mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter, i notice there are less grammar error and some improvement. The update for each chapter is also amazing.

    Ch 3 Chapter 3: Luck and Return By Death!
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  • xKiryuu
    xKiryuu1mth
    Commented

    Amazing idea and theory, props to the lad for coming up of something like that.

    Olatudobem: His luck, theoretically, should be killing him so that he gets the best possible ending, and doesn't end up as a "What If" route, since most are full of anguish and pain. 
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  • xKiryuu
    xKiryuu1mth
    Commented

    indeed it is.

    Cliffhangers are bitches, right?
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  • xKiryuu
    xKiryuu1mth
    Commented

    It will be amusing when Rem fall in love with Makoto, she will be no doubt a very overprotective mama bear.

    The old man himself wanted the boy to stay, he felt an urge to protect the boy like he was protecting Felt.
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  • xKiryuu
    xKiryuu1mth
    Commented

    Ultimate Lucky Pervert.

    By bumping to the person who was going towards the opposite direction they both fell with Makoto groaning in pain.
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  • xKiryuu
    xKiryuu1mth
    Commented

    Foreshadowing perhaps? I'm interested if Naegi will somehow be like Izuru Kamukura (My Favorite Character) or gained his Ultimate the more he experience the re;zero world.

    "I would say you are more talented than you look."
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