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Om_Prakash_Acharya

Om_Prakash_Acharya

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    Om_Prakash_Acharya1yr
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    Read till Chapter 126. The writer has a good hold of his writing style, and is very consistent overall. I like the story progression and generic motivation behind the MC. However, there is a glaring plot hole that is not covered at all. There is absolutely no mention of edged weapons at all in the academy time, but it was mentioned during 1st mission. This implies that they exist in this world. MC or his friends never encountered swords or other weapons when MC said that the land expansion of humans using gunpowder weapons was in stalemate. With the world low on technology, but still very much developed, it seems weapon forging would have been a great boon to humanity. Making this a complete martial arts novel is cool. Depending solely on flesh and bones to survive and excel without armor and weapons is a very good concept, but projectiles should be included. Humans created shields and bows of wood before metal, and it is established that trees are plentiful in this world. Cultivation without any energy to depend upon is very challenging and I commend the author to make it this detailed. Maybe they introduce it later on. They are already hinting at lightning, wind attributes, and whatnot, and if they do introduce energy/mana/qi I am curious as to how they incorporate it into a story without much foreshadowing. Overall at this point, I am bored of highly detailed martial art and want some exciting flexs instead of reasonable disapointment.

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    The Martial Unity
    Action · Lord_Streak
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    Om_Prakash_Acharya2yr
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    Evasive slime Domain

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    altalt
    The Tale of the Void Emperor
    Fantasy · LivingVoid
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    Om_Prakash_Acharya2yr
    Commented

    Tiana nodded her head thoughtfully as both of them started [Combat Arena].

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    The Tale of the Void Emperor
    Fantasy · LivingVoid
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    Om_Prakash_Acharya2yr
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    World design is outstanding.. i am waiting for the development to happen once the system becomes public . I think a little drama is missing .. like the court case could have been made a 2-3 chapter , with more reactions .. public reactions to the class action suit could have been more detailed . Waiting for some friendship moments from the novel .

    altalt
    Earth's Alpha Prime
    Fantasy · MN_1223
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