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A bored plagiarist is trying to write a novel that is made up of his own original ideas. Come see how miserably he fails!!
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GodComplexx1yrReplied to ImaslapurassAnd people say how Red Priest pathway will be boring...
"…" Aurore admitted she wasn't that cunning. She considered and said, "I've never tried it before, so I don't know if it'll work. You can try it yourself when you're at Sequence 7. However, I think having a White Paper beside you while summoning others might cause a conflict. It's unlikely to succeed. The only hope is to directly summon multiple White Papers, but there's a high chance that only Sequences skilled at summoning can do it."- GodComplexx1yrCommented
So, Fors came to the village a day before other foreigners, so she came here at the exact starting time of the loop?
Uh… That's right. He hasn't been caught red-handed by me during the early evening of March 29th. He hasn't fallen out with me, nor is there any worry that his secret plot is about to be exposed… With this in mind, Lumian instinctively reacted. - GodComplexx1yrCommented
This is too much, especially for a new reader, why do we have so many revelations one after another?? People will just forget the previous info if u keep on dropping so much important knowledge para after para... For us old readers too it feels so weird when endgame-level knowledge like Blasphemy State is being revealed so easily...
"As it involves the secret of becoming a deity, it's called the Blasphemy Slate. - GodComplexx1yrCommented
CK, what happened to the double quotes? Shouldn't it be "Their"
"Unfortunately, the owner of that voice is one such existence. It's not suitable for you to know Their honorific name at the moment." - GodComplexx1yrReplied to Ssnake23
Look the author wanted Book 2 to be in a way that new readers could read as well, but what it does is that when the new readers start LOTM they won't be able to enjoy it much, because all the 'mysteries' are exposed so early in the 2nd book that they might seem like trivial knowledge to a new reader, while they are supposed to be big revelations to us...
She spoke in a voice that sounded almost otherworldly, "What you need to master now are two laws and one method." - GodComplexx1yrCommented
Medici has really cool armor you know? so if u became a hunter... hehe just saying...
This was makeshift paper armor! - GodComplexx1yrCommented
So he felt. Eternal Blazing's 'warmth' last time when he prayed in the dream but this time he didn't... why? Maybe its because he hasn't left his dream house, so he is guarded against all 3rd parties by the safehouse??
There was no 100% certainty for most things in the world. Lumian didn't hesitate for a moment. He grabbed the pitchfork and axe from the bedroom and proceeded to the study. - GodComplexx1yrCommented
There's been an awful lot of Crimson Moon mentions and honestly, it creeps me up every time because all of this can act as symbolism- like Crimson moon obscured by clouds? more like Outer God's eye obscured by Evernight's protection...
The night was dark, the crimson moon obscured by thick clouds. - GodComplexx1yrCommented
Author Salon--- I think she is trying to contact her fellow transmigratory.
"Tomorrow morning, you're going to do me a favor. Head over to the administrator's office and help me send a telegram to Novel Weekly. Ask them when their next author salon will be held." - GodComplexx1yrCommented
Law of Beyonder Characteristics Convergence
"I really wasn't aware of such a legend before." - GodComplexx1yrReplied to Seadog
Not really, The red priest pathway has many good things in it, for starters, our friend, MEDICI... other than that its advancement is also very interesting like, for a demigod the ritual was to make a group of 30 or more people and build friendship, trust and make them all stronger and only then advance or... sequence 0 ritual which was to start a war that sweeps the whole continent and WIN. so no, it will still be very good..,.
At that moment, Lumian felt like he was a hunter, hunting in the mountains with his weapon and comrades, only to discover that the rabbit opposite him was clutching a water-cooled machine gun and targeting them. He considered it ridiculous and immersion-breaking, as well as disappointing. - GodComplexx1yrReplied to TearyTears
That is why it's so confusing..Its totally possible for Author to pull a reverse uno card on us
When it came to riling people up, Lumian was one of the best in all of Cordu. - GodComplexx1yrCommented
What happened to the Rose School of Thought though? There was supposed to be a big confrontation, it looks like we won but still some resistance huh...
The Southern Continent had already fallen under the dominion of the various powers of the Northern Continent. Whether it was the Balam Empire, the Paz Kingdom, the Haagenti Kingdom, or any of the other nations, they had all but lost their autonomy. Yet still, a fierce resistance against colonization burned in the hearts of the conquered. - GodComplexx1yrCommented
Intis... what was I even expecting...
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The description fits Fors BUT Fors has never been good looking, in fact she was always described as easily forgettable and ordinary looking, while this character is supposed to be 'exceptionally good looking'
Her dress was a long, flowing orange garment, and her locks were a rich brown, tousled in gentle curls. Her piercing, sky-blue eyes were fixed on the scarlet-hued drink that graced her delicate hand. - GodComplexx1yrCommented
Oh? The city Klein made for his ritual?
The port was not big. There was only a lighthouse, two simple docks, five warehouses, and a few buildings that served as a hotel, restaurant, bar, and police station. It did not take long for the four of them to circle the area. - GodComplexx1yrPosted
It's almost like the author writes 1 chapter, then divides that chapter into 10 chapters and fills the rest with summaries of the story that has happened in the past 10 chapters. Kevin, I really liked your story but why... why is there only face slapping, jade beauties, and completely typical cultivation MC left now? That's right, WW isn't any different from Lin Ming or Long Chen now
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A much-needed novel for Webnovel platform. We all know how unsaturated webnovels platform is. So seeing authors put out books that are not written by horny people is always appreciated but here... author went above and beyond. Shadow Slave can very well be compared to Published books and although not there yet, I can see it becoming something like stormlight archives equivalent book. In summary, author u are doing great work, people need to value well-written and thought-out stories like this more and hopefully by seeing such stories blast the others in oblivion, u just might be able to set a good precedent.
- GodComplexx1yrPosted
This novel is a bit too dark for my taste, especially in the first few chapters but I really appreciate any webnovel author who is willing to write a thought-out story... Webnovel standard has definitely risen due to this novel and the writing is also fabulous... Tho I would still prefer if there was a bit 'cultured' comedic relief, but thats just my taste and despite the differing taste i still enjoyed the novel