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authors of Chinese novels, what the fuck are you smoking? to be able to drag out 1 minute of action over several dozen chapters, this is still something you need to be able to do, and in general it’s not clear how the fuck the video is played, is it like some kind of universal screen reproducing past events in the form of video from 1st and 3rd person? I read 38 chapters purely out of principle, but in essence the plot didn’t even develop; they bully the main character, then make him good, and then bully him again. I certainly understand that Chinese novels have a tendency to drag out some emotional moment (like in this novel where there is a lot of pity for the main character, etc.), but not to the same extent...
As for me, if the author wants to cram orcs from Warcraft, make them less smart and less overly sophisticated words. I advise you to read the short story God of Magic of Stormwind, there are of course many chapters, but it is very informative on the Warcraft lore and interesting.
the work is good, but somehow you don’t feel the urgency of the need for strength to save your own original world. now it’s just becoming an omnipotent and all-seeing being with crazy jumps in power levels. but despite the fact that there is no longer such an obvious goal other than becoming stronger, the work is very good, one of the best.
how painfully long it is to wait for new chapters... it’s a pity that interesting short stories are always in the process of being released when I discover them with a small number of eyes or I have to wait a long time for new chapters.
too much water and monotony, it is simply described that shadow soldiers must be reckoned with and supposedly cool, but their coolness is not felt when words are repeated to describe the actions of each soldier. I just read the chapters and understand that they could not even be read, too boring, a lot of unnecessary words. I have a question after this battle will there be at least something about the main world of the protagonist? otherwise it will be just grind and grind, grind and grind, and nothing more. I understand that you need to be able to drag out chapters, but not lengthen boring moments to infinity.