maybe the development? i'm not sure since i can't clearly see the mistake here, as i see the story as a good book, but i still feel like there's something missing, but it's fine, whatever the mistake/s is/are, it will improve, you will improve !!

the book is so beautiful, the plot, the synopsis, the characters, especially prugna, everything !! would definitely read again, keep it up, author ~

Amazing story, everything is so good, the synopsis already gave me an excitement to read the book, and as i was reading it, it gave me chills, keep it up author~

May need a few editing, but the synopsis, the plot, the characters are amazing enough, it shows me how hard love is ! waiting for more, keep it up author~

Fascinating story, everything is good, the plot, the characters, everything ! It feels like you're actually in the story, good book, keep it up author ~

As the other fans/readers said, it is an amazing book, i also love how the girl gave the boy another chance, even though she was hurt a lot of times, keep it up, author~

I love it~ the plot, the characters, how they solve their problems together, everything ! it shows the reality, our world has, keep it up author !

Everything is so fascinating~ the writing skills the writer has is so good, the plot is different not like the others', like 'the girl met a rich boy and became her rival bla bla bla' the author's is different and that's what it made the book good, keep it up author~

One of my fave! definitely like the story as the plot is my type of stories, it made me sad for the leads as even if they love each other they still hurt the other, as written in the synopsis, keep it up, author~

I love these kind of story, the characters and the plot also gives me chills in my spine, now words can explain how fascinated i am! keep it up author~

Everything is so accurate, cute and fascinating! especially the lead's relationship with his mom, the writing's so good too, keep it up author~

Everything is so fascinating! I have no words to explain how good the writer writes, especially the plot and its characters. Keep it up, author~

Everything is so amazing, the plot, the characters, everything! No words can explain how amazed I am, waiting for more! I hope the writer keeps writing good stuff, keep striving dear author~

The story made me want to sing. The characters and the plot is so amazing, no words coukd explain how wonderful the plot is, waiting for more author !!

YOUR WRITING SKILLS IS SO COOOOOOLLLL~ the plot was amazing, no words could explain how fascinated i am, the plot, the characters, everything. keep striving author~

Cool storyyy, and the lead character is so fascinating awells, makes me want to be cool like them. And the plot is so amazing, everything about the story, it makes me chilly, might read again. And dear author! your writing is so good, want to be just like you~