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  • DeadSoul69
    DeadSoul692yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 1 The Harem Overlord And His Sacred Powers
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    Harem Overlord
    Eastern · BlackFlamer
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  • DeadSoul69
    DeadSoul692yr
    Replied to Vansavestheday

    ok, no problem man. The author just rewrote the firt volume but I don't have the time to read it so I was wondering if you had read it or not.

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    Harem Overlord
    Eastern · BlackFlamer
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  • DeadSoul69
    DeadSoul692yr
    Replied to Vansavestheday

    did you like it?

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    Harem Overlord
    Eastern · BlackFlamer
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  • DeadSoul69
    DeadSoul692yr
    Posted

    This is detailed review written after reading all the published chapters (95 chapters). Writing quality: 4⭐ The author has stated that he is not a native English speaker so some mistakes are expected. There aren't that many spelling mistakes but grammatical errors are there. So four stars are enough. Story development: 4.5⭐ A very fast paced story with little info dumps. The author however slows down the story for a few chapters to explain a few things and all that. Overall the story isn't full of chapters in which MC is breaking through or creating pills using different ingredients. After all, we are all culture lovers. Character design: 3.5-4 ⭐ The characters are certainly good and the harem girls are strong and not like those weak girls in Chinese novels. It is mentioned that even the MC is afraid of them at certain times. I would have given more stats but we don't recieve that many character interactions and details until the second volume. Updating stability: 4.5⭐ The author updates seven chapters a week and I haven't seen him missing any updates. However, I would personally like ten to twelve chapters a week but if it will decrease the quality, please don't do it. World Background: 3.5-4.5⭐ Again I can't decide how many stars should I give. At first glance, the world is like any other Chinese cultivation world but later on we find out that it's a little darker than those world's, especially the Central continent. I am still accumulating information about the world and I might update this later on. Overall 4-4.5⭐If you love dual cultivation and harem with a MC who doesn't care about any young masters or royals, this novel is perfect for you. As I said earlier, this is a fast paced novel so you won't be bored sitting around waiting for the MC to breakthrough or creating a pill. I hope that this review helped you understand the novel.

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    Harem Overlord
    Eastern · BlackFlamer
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  • DeadSoul69
    DeadSoul692yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 96 How To Fuck Virgins (R-18)
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    Harem Overlord
    Eastern · BlackFlamer
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  • DeadSoul69
    DeadSoul692yr
    Commented

    Did he just appear in the middle of the universe?

    Ripples went through the entire space as Kai's body appeared in the middle of the universe. Many cosmos were present beside him, each having a certain color.
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    Harem Overlord
    Eastern · BlackFlamer
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  • DeadSoul69
    DeadSoul692yr
    Replied to DaoistsQUTlP

    If he covers his body with all those hands, it would be kind of cool.

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    Inhuman Warlock
    Fantasy · Demonic_angel
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  • DeadSoul69
    DeadSoul692yr
    Replied to Anastaxius

    *plays legends never dies in the background*

    In the vast wasteland, one body was lying. Seemingly dead yet not quite.
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    Inhuman Warlock
    Fantasy · Demonic_angel
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  • DeadSoul69
    DeadSoul692yr
    Replied to Solitary_Essence

    well, I hope that Rao bastards dies bloody and the MC rips apart his body

    "Lucifer Azarel, come with us," Doctor Rao said.
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    Inhuman Warlock
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  • DeadSoul69
    DeadSoul692yr
    Replied to Silent_Solidarity

    *fades away into the background with a whooshing noise*

    "We are doing this for the betterment of humanity; hence he became useful to humanity. Also, it would take too much time to get another test subject here," he added.
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    Inhuman Warlock
    Fantasy · Demonic_angel
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  • DeadSoul69
    DeadSoul692yr
    Replied to Alaric

    *loads ammo to shotgun* I am right behind ya.

    "Their son turned out to be a waste that has no powers. I believe that if Zale and Clarisse were alive, even they too wouldn't want a son like that," General Maxwell said as he looked out the window. "I'm right, aren't I?"
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  • DeadSoul69
    DeadSoul692yr
    Replied to Drsanders

    I think they are all tense

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    Inhuman Warlock
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  • DeadSoul69
    DeadSoul692yr
    Posted

    I am sorry but I am dropping this novel. I know that we all want a peaceful life but this story is quite frustrating and annoying. The MC practically gives up on anything that comes his way, whether it's a battle or challenge or something like and his system basically makes him stronger while he does nothing. Other than that, there are many grammatical errors in this story and sometimes, I can't even read a chapter before finding mistakes. I am sorry but I will have to drop it as I cannot read it any further

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    I JUST WANT A PEACEFUL LIFE
    Fantasy · Alex_Destro
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  • DeadSoul69
    DeadSoul692yr
    Replied to GhostOwl

    and saving his phsyco brother who is killing him because the woman he loves instead loves his brother is right?

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  • DeadSoul69
    DeadSoul692yr
    Commented

    How did he get Lucifer's tears? Did he went to Los Angeles through transmigration and came back or did just Lucifer pop up like, "Here, take my tears and whoever will drink this would die" or something else?

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    I JUST WANT A PEACEFUL LIFE
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  • DeadSoul69
    DeadSoul692yr
    Replied to YadaYada

    exactly

    Year XXXX
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    I JUST WANT A PEACEFUL LIFE
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  • DeadSoul69
    DeadSoul692yr
    Replied to Anti_Zero

    Me three

    Sin has always stuck with humans since ancient times. No matter who it is, humans always commit sins in their life. 
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    I JUST WANT A PEACEFUL LIFE
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  • DeadSoul69
    DeadSoul692yr
    Replied to Triple_x

    But didn't he go back after he checked his cultivation and all of them were gone? How does that make him a coward?

    Ch 3 The Golden Blood
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    Harem Overlord
    Eastern · BlackFlamer
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  • DeadSoul69
    DeadSoul692yr
    Replied to ReignOfGhosts

    JoJo's bizarre adventures!

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    Harem Overlord
    Eastern · BlackFlamer
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  • DeadSoul69
    DeadSoul692yr
    Commented

    A good no game no life reference

    Ch 2 Falling On The Mortal Cultivation World
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    Harem Overlord
    Eastern · BlackFlamer
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