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PandoraGG10mthCommentedwhy?
The next day around noon all the five great heroes had been summoned along with everyone else, they were to be informed of which squad they would be in and depart the next day early in the morning. Some of the summoned who didn't wish to participate in the war had chosen to refrain from attending the summon, but to people's surprise, Alen had decided to join the group despite making his intention crystal clear.- PandoraGG10mthCommented
heard?
When she did so, she heard some strange sounds behind her, and then a very quiet. Thank you. - PandoraGG11mthCommentedCh 225 Chapter 222 : Potential & Limit!
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I thought his eyes were his strongest part of his body considering how much he looks at girls.
I was also pushed back but my fingers dig into the ground and anchored me in my place. I put my arm up to block pebbles and twigs from entering my sensitive eyes - PandoraGG1yrCommented
her whole character is useless and a waste of word. its kinda annoying how the author developing her and then make the MC say "doesn't matter she will die in X time"... it would have been better writing to make her nice and then the mc will have doubts whether to save her or not, and then the author could have continued with this approach and make him face Itachi and having him suffer a defeat for the first time and that will make his resolve to become stronger far bigger then his current one. I am not saying author writing is bad. I could never write at the level that he is writing it just that its the 7th time mc says that and I got annoyed. sorry for bad english.
Fujin looked at her and said in his mind, 'Unlike you, I have more than a year to live.' - PandoraGG1yrCommented
I hate that kind of writing. All this "in the future..." stuff is annoying and spoils the rest
Danzo left and didn't think about Fujin again. Years later, he would hear about Fujin's exploits in the battlefields. In one such battle, Fujin's fame would explode throughout the ninja world. That battle would make Danzo regret not trying hard enough to recruit him. And the biggest regret would be when he dies by the hands of the orphan he attached no importance to! - PandoraGG1yrPosted
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Hebrew?
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you know the story will be boring once mc choose a gun...
The weapon that he was standing in front of was… a gun. - PandoraGG1yrCommented
great healing potion - 50 points perfect healing potion -10 points
[10 Points] - PandoraGG1yrCommented
why would he think about that? is it just a dumb way for author to show us he is smart?
"Sudden volts of lightning can paralyze a person. The momentum and speed from the chant I got, the volts increased enough to paralyze that woman in one hit." Aiden slowly started explaining. "The impact of the crash knocked her unconscious. If this was a war, I would have taken her captive and would have obtained information from her later on." - PandoraGG1yrPosted
I read 100+ novels and at least 30% of them are written poorly. but I got to say this one is the worse, the idea of the story is nice but it is written horribly, mc lives in 100BC then get teleported to 2000+ and yet the only thing he found interesting is cars and cool houses. what sort of reaction is that? mc acts like a robot. and it feels like the author just forgot to add ton of information. I tried looking at reviews and comments but I guess everyone is the author friends because I see no one talks about that. I bet even if I tried to create a novel it will come out better then this, at least when I will write an mc from 100bc that gets a system his first reaction wont be: "its like a game". sorry for bad English.
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when?
This paragraph has been deleted. - PandoraGG2yrReplied to SnakewoodCh 23 Logs and Magic Scroll
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Finally! an mc that saves his points untill something happens and not just wasting them the moment he receive them. author can create scenarios where mc fight on equal grounds with opponent and then upgrade himself to suprise the opponent.
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at the start it seems like the author doesn't like plot armour but then he keep adding more and more stuff to mc... at this rate its just becomes the generic 3 star Isekai.
Unlike his poor space ring which barely had 3-meter inner space, the ring in his had a total of 50 meters of space.. Big enough to be compared with a small warehouse. - PandoraGG2yrCommented
but he had a last name at the start no? Kahn Arlen if I remember...
"I'm Kahn. No last name." said Kahn as he replied.