Rillik
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idk know them just assume if a smart character with no arrogance
expect peak... but the updates are very slow like once every three or more weeks, although each chapter is bigger than 10k words in total at least the later chapters i forgot if the beginning had that many words
kekw
Chapter 15 is the start of a timeskip kind of monologue as in they more focus on progression on them growing up and notable events related to them so expect more timeskips as i try to arrive at the yggrasil arc which would begin when they turn around 25 years old,### afterall I also want to explore that more deeply, this new yggrasil game is drastically yet oddly Similar to the original so it does excite me, ### although new world might be a shorter arc as that's more of a final arc for this fanfic and also because i find it kinda boring i guess since it would soon expand into the omniverse via other fanfics at the end, so don't really expect a good new world story arc, i much rather focus on the npcs and nazarick and other characters than conquering a small universe
Other fanfics I have read usually don't put so many lines that it causes me to feel disoriented and not be able to tell if the chapter ended there or not, especially if the chapter was in first pov of speech "I, am" and stuff ### And I usually don't read Author notes in a chapter unless the author already have a habit of writing them other than using as a promotion for Their Patreon or discord links and no i am not talking about the author thoughts section that webnovel has as a function, does anyone even uses it? i instinctively ignore it at this point lol
idk who that is but someone should have told him there's more gold underwater and also in astroids, could have caused more death trying to reach either of them, heck should have told him the sun's core is made out of gold (not true) and that's why it's bright yellow
hai hai, when they start playing in yggrasil I will try to add more bloodshed
sorry if you were disappointed... maybe if I make a war hammer or something I might include more gore, this is more to hint at his personality, besides the random gore wouldn't have made sense
We're* else it becomes the word were
So it's not earth, good to know
I mustn't, cats are important
Nowhere*
Good luck
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My fever seemed to have intensified according to my mom, as I am feeling more nausea and my eyes are burning along with hot air is being released from my nose, too graphic? Eh, anyways sorry for not uploading any chapters these few days, as fever made me not being able to think properly when I am trying to write chapters, even right now I randomly blanked out lol anyways at least I have chapter ideas to write, again sorry for causing this inconvenience, hopefully I can recover and write the chapters... (repost from discord server announcement)
just added warnings to consider in the synopsis such as Au and stuff ## Also either you skipped through what was written or forgot about it... but let me do clarify for you, first this is his second life, I think I have already stated this but still second, he is basically numb to feelings now ## now onto things I haven't really explored but merely hinted a lot through the chapters, this second life is his own way of finding a proper family, As in his previous life he wouldn't be able to achieve that properly... let's just say dictators aren't people who would most consider family, especially someone at his grand scale, his mindset is also truly morphed ## I am still somewhat disappointed how nobody have noticed his odd behavior pattern especially considering how he behaved before reincarnating... but I concur, hopefully one day I will meet my ideal reader who notices all those hints... ## The qoutes do at least convey what sort of thought process the mc has so hopefully that helps dilute whatever made you think he might be pathetic of all things lol... anyways hopefully that helped, if you still wanna read but feel impatient, i do recocmmend stacking the chapters until a lot of chapters have been uploaded in total, as it might take sometime before i get to yggrasil ### and considering new world? just forget about it for now, if mc arrives at new world it would probably be a pretty short arc but that depends one if he feels "bored" or not... I wonder what would a dictator do if they were bored...
Well this Fanfic won't be for everyone, that i understannd and thanks for being upfront about it, ## It's interesting seeing someone call My mc pathetic without having the patience to look at all the clues spread across all the chapters released so far, but nonetheless I concur it's undderstandable why you would assume he is pathetic. ## The difference between my fanfic with all the other fanfics related to overlord is they are building a fanfic limited to overlord and other anime characters as "Npcs" while I am building an Omniversal story that branches off into other fanfics that I would release after this ## And why does that matter? simple if I followed Their trend then the story would be the repeat curse of most overlord fanfics rushing to the new world with an overpowered horni mc, very rarely have i read overlord fanfics where the author was creative and tried to make compelling stories without getting bored and dropping it because they didn't take their time ## Anyways, nothing is truly useless in my fanfic, from the chapter titles, to those odd qoutes at the beginning, even names I came up for my characters... btw you are the only one so far who complained about the pace but nonetheless i do understand it, as I also feel kinda the same even if majority of my fanbase is willing be patience and that's why the next chapter which I would be Releasing is also a timeskip, not too big but enough to be substance,## Still your choice if you want to continue reading my fanfic and also help me make the story more fun to read, afterall I am still a newbie writer, My goal is to touch my reader's heart and make them feel connected, which i think i have failed to do so far, oh well, thank you for reading this if you did, Hopefully you have a good weekend and stay safe and hydrated, just had a fever so couldn't upload the past two days, as my mind went numb enough to not be able to write properly