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Rillik

Rillik

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invite me when you wanna set the world on fire :)

2021-06-19 JoinedGlobal
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  • Rillik
    Rillik1mth
    Replied to Jandraken

    idk know them just assume if a smart character with no arrogance

    "that's an odd choice but I guess it makes sense as you can grow safely in that game before the Transfer event, I honestly thought you might choose Dragon Ball or Tensura going by how powerful you can be with your set of brains, wouldn't be surprised if you conquered those universes in at least five years that only if you are taking your time but I concur, you probably have your plans," Gabriel told his thoughts on the matter.
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  • Rillik
    Rillik1mth
    Replied to cyber_psycho

    expect peak... but the updates are very slow like once every three or more weeks, although each chapter is bigger than 10k words in total at least the later chapters i forgot if the beginning had that many words

    8. It is important to note that the MC will not engage in superficial relationships with other characters solely for personal gain. I find it distasteful when a story becomes unrealistic and is filled with extreme wish fulfillment. For instance, I dislike when the MC is portrayed as the mentor of Tony Stark, sparring partner of Captain America, best friends with Thor, friends with Hulk, etc. If you desire to read a story of this nature, there are several subpar options available in *hin*** Marvel fanfics. Such stories tend to be cliché, with characters appearing one-dimensional. For instance, Thor instantly becoming best friends with the MC simply because he helped him during a battle once is a trope that contributes to the story's decline in quality.
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  • Rillik
    Rillik1mth
    Replied to justacoffeeaddict

    am just being lazy at this point...

    Ch 15 Chapter 15: The Power to Reshape The Universe...
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  • Rillik
    Rillik2mth
    Replied to Magus_Of_Flower

    kekw

    <<<<<DON'T LOOK DOWN US, DANN IT!!>>>>> They both said at the same time in the soul corridor
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  • Rillik
    Rillik2mth
    Replied to Miki_Marlo75

    like what?

    Ch 15 Chapter 15: The Power to Reshape The Universe...
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  • Rillik
    Rillik2mth
    Replied to Magus_Of_Flower

    Chapter 15 is the start of a timeskip kind of monologue as in they more focus on progression on them growing up and notable events related to them so expect more timeskips as i try to arrive at the yggrasil arc which would begin when they turn around 25 years old,### afterall I also want to explore that more deeply, this new yggrasil game is drastically yet oddly Similar to the original so it does excite me, ### although new world might be a shorter arc as that's more of a final arc for this fanfic and also because i find it kinda boring i guess since it would soon expand into the omniverse via other fanfics at the end, so don't really expect a good new world story arc, i much rather focus on the npcs and nazarick and other characters than conquering a small universe

    This is probably my favorite chapter so far... By the way is my story boring? Or should I continue at the same pace? There will be soon a timeskip again after a few chapters more
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  • Rillik
    Rillik2mth
    Replied to Bored_MC

    Other fanfics I have read usually don't put so many lines that it causes me to feel disoriented and not be able to tell if the chapter ended there or not, especially if the chapter was in first pov of speech "I, am" and stuff ### And I usually don't read Author notes in a chapter unless the author already have a habit of writing them other than using as a promotion for Their Patreon or discord links and no i am not talking about the author thoughts section that webnovel has as a function, does anyone even uses it? i instinctively ignore it at this point lol

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  • Rillik
    Rillik2mth
    Replied to King_Of_SpaceTime

    idk who that is but someone should have told him there's more gold underwater and also in astroids, could have caused more death trying to reach either of them, heck should have told him the sun's core is made out of gold (not true) and that's why it's bright yellow

    "BEAWARE of the Greedy dictator, not because of his army, not because he is powerful, but simply because he is ALWAYS Prepared...".
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  • Rillik
    Rillik2mth
    Replied to justacoffeeaddict

    hai hai, when they start playing in yggrasil I will try to add more bloodshed

    "... Interesting... So this is a nightmare... Fueled by Emotions..." Yet when The entity heard what Masamune said in an amused tone.
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  • Rillik
    Rillik2mth
    Replied to justacoffeeaddict

    sorry if you were disappointed... maybe if I make a war hammer or something I might include more gore, this is more to hint at his personality, besides the random gore wouldn't have made sense

    "... Interesting... So this is a nightmare... Fueled by Emotions..." Yet when The entity heard what Masamune said in an amused tone.
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  • Rillik
    Rillik2mth
    Commented

    We're* else it becomes the word were

    Retrieval team 1: captain were back with the report.
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  • Rillik
    Rillik2mth
    Commented

    So it's not earth, good to know

    Major Allen: now there seems to be an energy spike in the merem district, send some of our men to check out that location now.
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  • Rillik
    Rillik2mth
    Replied to meliodaswrath

    I mustn't, cats are important

    A figure can be seen working out of a portal and falls to a knee panting as the portal closes up behind him he gasps for air before looking around to get an understanding of where he is, getting up and walking towards the door with shaky steps while using the walls as a support as he opens the door to the rooftop and leaves as if nothing happened, walking down the steps a light from the ceiling shins down on him and the figure turns out to be a teen with silver and dark colored hair
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  • Rillik
    Rillik2mth
    Commented

    Nowhere*

    Just as he left the alleyway and looked around to make sure that the people chasing him were no were in sight he made his way back to the exit of the alley, just when he was close to exiting the alley a hand was placed on his neck and mouth as muffled sounds of help can be heard from him before being dragged back into the darkness of the alley.
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  • Rillik
    Rillik2mth
    Replied to Crazy_Penguin

    Good luck

    "Certainly. I just need to incorporate some magical runes into the robots," Andrew chuckled. "The souls of this hell will embark on their second life in the form of mechanical beings."
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  • Rillik
    Rillik2mth
    Replied to Anthony_Roach

    will try to post more, hopefully I can write today, i now have drowsy nose and mild cough instead of intense fever

    Ch 14 Chapter 14: Song that Touched The Maiden's Heart
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  • Rillik
    Rillik2mth
    Commented

    hmmm

    "It's named Oasis mostly because it's a haven for lost travelers of the multiverse, as they can rest up and gather their energy before traveling again, this specific one is right outside the limbo of our universe which is 218,222,43, that's why it hurt your soul body originally as your soul passed through the border, it wouldn't have happened if you weren't in space and your body was disintegrated " Gabriel grumbled again at the end.
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  • Rillik
    Rillik2mth
    Commented

    My fever seemed to have intensified according to my mom, as I am feeling more nausea and my eyes are burning along with hot air is being released from my nose, too graphic? Eh, anyways sorry for not uploading any chapters these few days, as fever made me not being able to think properly when I am trying to write chapters, even right now I randomly blanked out lol anyways at least I have chapter ideas to write, again sorry for causing this inconvenience, hopefully I can recover and write the chapters... (repost from discord server announcement)

    Ch 14 Chapter 14: Song that Touched The Maiden's Heart
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  • Rillik
    Rillik2mth
    Replied to DemotedLuffy02

    just added warnings to consider in the synopsis such as Au and stuff ## Also either you skipped through what was written or forgot about it... but let me do clarify for you, first this is his second life, I think I have already stated this but still second, he is basically numb to feelings now ## now onto things I haven't really explored but merely hinted a lot through the chapters, this second life is his own way of finding a proper family, As in his previous life he wouldn't be able to achieve that properly... let's just say dictators aren't people who would most consider family, especially someone at his grand scale, his mindset is also truly morphed ## I am still somewhat disappointed how nobody have noticed his odd behavior pattern especially considering how he behaved before reincarnating... but I concur, hopefully one day I will meet my ideal reader who notices all those hints... ## The qoutes do at least convey what sort of thought process the mc has so hopefully that helps dilute whatever made you think he might be pathetic of all things lol... anyways hopefully that helped, if you still wanna read but feel impatient, i do recocmmend stacking the chapters until a lot of chapters have been uploaded in total, as it might take sometime before i get to yggrasil ### and considering new world? just forget about it for now, if mc arrives at new world it would probably be a pretty short arc but that depends one if he feels "bored" or not... I wonder what would a dictator do if they were bored...

    Ch 5 Chapter 5: How Fun! Politics in a Kid's Birthday Party!
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  • Rillik
    Rillik2mth
    Replied to DemotedLuffy02

    Well this Fanfic won't be for everyone, that i understannd and thanks for being upfront about it, ## It's interesting seeing someone call My mc pathetic without having the patience to look at all the clues spread across all the chapters released so far, but nonetheless I concur it's undderstandable why you would assume he is pathetic. ## The difference between my fanfic with all the other fanfics related to overlord is they are building a fanfic limited to overlord and other anime characters as "Npcs" while I am building an Omniversal story that branches off into other fanfics that I would release after this ## And why does that matter? simple if I followed Their trend then the story would be the repeat curse of most overlord fanfics rushing to the new world with an overpowered horni mc, very rarely have i read overlord fanfics where the author was creative and tried to make compelling stories without getting bored and dropping it because they didn't take their time ## Anyways, nothing is truly useless in my fanfic, from the chapter titles, to those odd qoutes at the beginning, even names I came up for my characters... btw you are the only one so far who complained about the pace but nonetheless i do understand it, as I also feel kinda the same even if majority of my fanbase is willing be patience and that's why the next chapter which I would be Releasing is also a timeskip, not too big but enough to be substance,## Still your choice if you want to continue reading my fanfic and also help me make the story more fun to read, afterall I am still a newbie writer, My goal is to touch my reader's heart and make them feel connected, which i think i have failed to do so far, oh well, thank you for reading this if you did, Hopefully you have a good weekend and stay safe and hydrated, just had a fever so couldn't upload the past two days, as my mind went numb enough to not be able to write properly

    Ch 5 Chapter 5: How Fun! Politics in a Kid's Birthday Party!
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