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Super_Surprised2311yrCommentedSun-gazer for nickname maybe
second, I do have a name, but not a nickname. His name is Gaelithox. His scale is gleaming golden, with lots and lots of spikes. He had a deformed neck, as if it was bulging around his head area. He also had a deformed third eye in the middle of his head, he can't see from it, as it's like a tumor. Really aggressive. (Like humans, Dragons can get like this because they're inbred too lol.)- Super_Surprised2311yrCommented
Iâd say Fleur and the Weasly brother, just. Not sure if itâ canon but if it is it just feels like she settled hard. She went from a tri-wizard candidate to marrying, well, a Weasly. I could be wrong though, it is late on my end. Bit of research is required
(End AN: And another question. If you could change one couple in the franchise, which couple would you change? - Super_Surprised2311yrCommented
Is this hinting at the tri-wizard tournament?
"That very true of course and we will find out if I have overestimated you or not in a few years. Now let's see about wand care," he then showed me how to properly take care of the wand with a wand kit. - Super_Surprised2311yrReplied to world_domination
Itâs Nezu
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Donât want them to just pop up in Orario, finishing off a loose end here and there and then back to the dungeon
I am going to add a little more backstory to Ranger that hopefully fleshes out her character a little in a satisfactory way but I'm also not going to drag this out. - Super_Surprised2311yrReplied to real777
I did that because thatâs the type of measurements the characters would use. If I counted down the meters it would start feeling like a low-budget submarine movie
Upon closer inspection, the hedge was 3 men tall and ensured privacy for the inhabitants. Now the only chance an outsider had of catching glimpses of the familia members was when they left through the gates. When one brave soul decided to try and catch a glimpse of the rumoured 'beauties of Loki' he was in for a rude awakening. The man wanted to scale the hedge, claiming that it was simply another barrier to test his determination against. He gave a speech that made the surrounding men look at him reverently and the woman to roll their eyes. This preacher only placed a hand on the hedge and passed out, asleep and snoring, right then and there. This wouldn't be too surprising if the man hadn't been a level 2 adventurer, this event caused some of the more cautious adventurers to carefully look within the hedge and find green rose-like flowers facing in all directions. Reaching out to grab one, it puffed a cloud of spores onto his hand and he fell asleep as well. Learning of this the public dubbed them Trickster's Roses and once this was brought to the attention of the goddess in question, she simply asked what these people were doing climbing her hedge and started selling the spores in little vials to the alchemists because regardless of how much protection anyone had, once they touched the rose they would fall asleep. Many wondered how the Loki familia harvested the ingredients but non ever dared to ask. - Super_Surprised2311yrCommented
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1. Continue as it is and implement better writing from here on. It can be considered an AU for the small changes in lore detail. - Super_Surprised2311yrReplied to king_Gurra10Ch 33 32. The Chase
- Super_Surprised2311yrCommented
I say keep at the history đ¤ˇââď¸ it integrates the mc perfectly and avoids people asking in the future âbut why is that happening?â
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In the auxiliary chapters
"Never heard of your skill and magic but I do know it's very rare to have both as the same name, means it's something special" Loki commented after reading through the status on Marlet's back. Coming to the curse, Loki didn't expect there to be one but upon reading its effects she couldn't help but think what a monster this child could become. Granted she had to work five times harder than everyone else, but at the higher levels, that curse will turn into a blessing. Marlet reading through the paper Loki handed her had her eyes almost pop out her skull reading her DA (development ability) and magic. How could she not, being an avid Skyrim fan in her past life and remembering the entire gameplay like the back of her hand. She tried many things like saying status or panel in her head, even tried saying pause to see if it worked. Releasing a sigh in frustration Marlet could look at the goddess before her and say "if my thinking is correct, I can become one versatile person and you just scored big time" this got another feral grin from Loki. "Let's put that to the side fro now, you said this was a fictional world for you. So what are we going to do?" This caused Marlet to think hard before responding to the goddess's question, eventually she simply shrugged her shoulders and explained the events in the anime as they occurred. She told Loki about Hestia's decent and her first adventurer being a boy with white hair and red eyes. The involvement of the Freya familia in the shadows and how Apollo will challenge Hestia to a war games and lose. She explained that she didn't know any further and that when asked why give her all this information Marlet simply responded with "my very existence is going to change events here now for the better or worse, I can think maybe 2 or 3 steps ahead but you, goddess Loki, can play the long game and that's what I need at the moment." - Super_Surprised2311yrCommented
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Don't Rewrite- - Super_Surprised2311yrReplied to Leylindd
MHA: Dark Angel đ
Others (Comment here if you have any suggestions) - Super_Surprised2311yrReplied to Super_Surprised231
Sorry, ignore the undercover part. Got confused with another novel for a sec
Others (Comment here if you have any suggestions) - Super_Surprised2311yrCommented
I was thinking something like Ronin, Samurai or Vengeance The first 2 for obvious reasons and the third because he wants to be an undercover hero and as a sort of homage to the bat đ¤ˇââď¸
Others (Comment here if you have any suggestions) - Super_Surprised2311yrCommented
Plus ultra
Fleur Delacour - Have a idea for lifespan. - Super_Surprised2312yrCommented
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-DC UNIVERSE - Super_Surprised2312yrReplied to King_Of_SpaceTime
Definitely not dropping it, things have just gotten a little crazy recently and itâ made my writing staggered. Like I said before, I wanna focus on quality and not quantity so Iâll try and maybe do a mass release this weekend
Ch 28 27. Running Thoughts - Super_Surprised2312yrReplied to SleepyPanda00Ch 28 27. Running Thoughts