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    Design_backup8mth
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    Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

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    The tower of Heaven: Lust and destruction
    Fantasy · daygonyuuki
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    Design_backup1yr
    Posted

    Finally, a book that his word building in it. I wanted to find such a book for some time but nothing caught my attention.

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    Surviving as the Second Main Lead: Second Lead's POV
    Fantasy · daygonyuuki
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    Design_backup1yr
    Posted

    For what it's worth, I really enjoyed this story. It was nice to see someone write long chapters for readers (even though clarity was never the best) but I will advise you to keep going on and improve in the future as well.

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    This MOB must survive
    Fantasy · Mikuraji
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  • Design_backup
    Design_backup1yr
    Posted

    Lol. This gives out major gothic vibes to me and I hope you'll include more of the explorable elements of mythology or it'll feel like a missed opportunity

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    Abyss of Dual Cultivation: Goddess's Lust system
    Fantasy · daygon_yuuki
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  • Design_backup
    Design_backup2yr
    Posted

    It's really good with minimal mistakes which makes it readable. I find the formatting to be clear as well which puts me in a good mood while reading. I will be sticking around to it and see after 50+ chapters how I feel about it.

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    The second female lead Dual Cultivates
    Fantasy · daygonyuuki
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  • Design_backup
    Design_backup2yr
    Replied to Slc4free

    No. He'll not stay single forever, but he's also 11 right now. Harem tag is there because it will become a huge plot point pretty soon

    altalt
    The creator of Magic is Back as the Dual Magician
    Fantasy · Design_backup
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    Design_backup2yr
    Replied to Ryuujisan

    The main romantic interest is in the background for now. Maybe MC will get a lover in the future but I'll set up the important bits first. I need to get the background of characters established first and relationships to hint at. Xion is so much trouble but fun to write too and her fem harem. I have plans for her alright

    Taking Responsibility
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    The creator of Magic is Back as the Dual Magician
    Fantasy · Design_backup
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    Design_backup2yr
    Replied to light_4458

    Study degree?

    Ch 18 Resolving the situation
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    The creator of Magic is Back as the Dual Magician
    Fantasy · Design_backup
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    Design_backup2yr
    Posted

    The synopsis seems catchy. The first few chapters are good as well and I can see this develop into more. The plot is just setting up so I will see how it developed before leaving more crit here

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    This book has no chapters read Will Fate Bring Us Together
    Urban · Rayne_Rue
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    Design_backup2yr
    Replied to Stormzz

    Thank you for pointing it out. I corrected it

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    The creator of Magic is Back as the Dual Magician
    Fantasy · Design_backup
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    Design_backup2yr
    Posted

    The concept is really good but I feel like there is too much dialogue in one place. It takes away from the action in some cases but that is just my opinion on the issue. I do like the story progression and how it is presented though so I would give the story that.

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    The One Snap Boy
    Fantasy · Stormzz
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  • Design_backup
    Design_backup2yr
    Posted

    Author here. I will see how this performs in a week and then decide if I want to continue this or not. So, please try and enjoy as much as you can

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    The creator of Magic is Back as the Dual Magician
    Fantasy · Design_backup
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    Design_backup2yr
    Posted

    Despite the abundance of harem on this site, there is a surprising lack of good ones. I find this one among the better ones since nothing seemed forced and the relationships seemed to have a background rather than jumping straight in

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    DUAL ABILITY: I'm the OP God Doctor
    Fantasy · daygon_yuuki
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    Design_backup2yr
    Posted

    Glad to see you posting something like this. I really really like it and I'm going to add it into my library for future reads. Hopefully the updates will not be thay slow

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    Unforgettable Memoir (BL)
    Fantasy · daygon_yuuki
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    Design_backup2yr
    Commented

    I love this story so much

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    The Deity's curse
    LGBT+ · daygon_yuuki
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