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Jessica_Cleveland_5112

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2021-06-18 JoinedGlobal
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  • Jessica_Cleveland_5112
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    it's here not hear

    I turned back to the couch, feeling so overwhelmed and anxious I had tears welling up in my eyes. I felt Damien's hand reach for mine. As I let him take my hand I looked up and met his wary eyes. He gently pulled me down to his lap and wrapped me in his protective embrace. "Babygirl I am hear with you. I will be hear this whole time, and we will be here together. No matter what happens, I'm not going anywhere. I promise you." He whispered gently in my ear. Gently nodding my head up and down I took a deep breath and rested my head on his shoulder.
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  • Jessica_Cleveland_5112
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    changing the spelling of Damien's name throughout the chapter?

    Ch 28 Wet Dreams
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  • Jessica_Cleveland_5112
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    why all of the sudden are you using </> what is the significance? it's getting a bit tough to read

    Ch 17 Car Ride - Part I
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