darling please for the sake of your readers find an editor for your book

plz find some one to edit your book if you can't find a proper editor contact me I'll do it for free

dear author I support you

hi author, your story line is good, I understand your English is not good why don't you get someone to help you with your English edit. I think the simple mistakes can be resolved with the help of an editor.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

loved the story. story line is good and character are nice. good luck and keep it up

sooooo..... good author I fell in love with your story. the reactin of the crowd well written and very realistic

I prefer female lead who are confident and don't let male leads to trample all over their dignity. you are very good at writting the character.

loved it

I loved it.the girl was brave as well as vulnerable.the story is also good.