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Have you seen Gabriel's picture in dxd?
This story is great... I only have one problem, I don't like Asia's original design. In the anime/novel, she is too poorly equipped for DXD. Could you please enlarge it, Mr. Author? Make her bumpers bigger :) I found a nice picture that would match her :)
It would be better if I became the 2nd Ace of Heaven
Great chapter, can't wait for the next one :)
I was looking for a nice picture of Naruko and I found something like this :) Of course, this is the picture when she is older :D
Nice manipulator... It would be nice to see Shiori as the last boss of the series, who is powerful and manipulates everyone... It wouldn't make the series worse because it is OP, in fact it would be more interesting... I don't like weak characters... So what if she's smart, she'll destroy you if you want to go somewhere and you have to carry meat with you in the form of bodyguards... So please don't make her weak, Mr. Author...
Overall, this story has lost a lot in my eyes over the last few chapters, now I don't like it so much... I know that it is the author who shapes the stories, but I hate series in which the main character is bullied by the author when he at the beginning it creates him as someone great in the future... It's the worst thing you can do...
You had to turn Izumi into a copy of Siori, I understand that this is caused by absorbing Shiori's energy, but in my opinion it's a bit distasteful... It's nice that Shiori regained access to chakra, but I still don't like the way it was done and the fact that you had to shame her like that... Now you're making her a victim instead of Saske, just to have an excuse to bring Tsunade to the village to heal her and become Hokage...
I still don't like this plot device... I don't like Izumi's character at all, you could have let Shiori absorb her, at least sparing her would have been justified... I don't like that she found out about the canon, it's the worst thing that can happen...