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  • Egox_Pro
    Egox_Pro1mth
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    Will sakura look like on the cover later?

    Ch 23 What a fool I am !
    Reborn as a Useless girl
    Anime & Comics · AnimefanfictionInd
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  • Egox_Pro
    Egox_Pro1mth
    Replied to VaingloryPrincess

    Have you seen Gabriel's picture in dxd?

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  • Egox_Pro
    Egox_Pro1mth
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    This story is great... I only have one problem, I don't like Asia's original design. In the anime/novel, she is too poorly equipped for DXD. Could you please enlarge it, Mr. Author? Make her bumpers bigger :) I found a nice picture that would match her :)

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  • Egox_Pro
    Egox_Pro1mth
    Replied to 17541916_Black

    It would be better if I became the 2nd Ace of Heaven

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  • Egox_Pro
    Egox_Pro1mth
    Commented

    Great chapter, can't wait for the next one :)

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  • Egox_Pro
    Egox_Pro1mth
    Commented

    This novella is really cool, I can't wait :) But honestly, I prefer the original plot rather than this adventure in the world of Arifureta...

    Ch 16 Planning for the future
    RWBY: Dragon's Heart
    Anime & Comics · Saeko_Kaburagi
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  • Egox_Pro
    Egox_Pro3mth
    Commented

    I was looking for a nice picture of Naruko and I found something like this :) Of course, this is the picture when she is older :D

    Ch 45 Ruh-roh. I'm in danger.
    This Isn't Canon! (Or that time I reincarnated into an AU-Naruto)
    Anime & Comics · BalancedSelfInsert
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  • Egox_Pro
    Egox_Pro3mth
    Commented

    In my opinion, MC is breeding too much, author, you are exaggerating with the number of these children...

    Ch 233 Stand Off With The Japanese
    Reality Bender System, Marvel
    Anime & Comics · Alex_Simmonds
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  • Egox_Pro
    Egox_Pro3mth
    Commented

    I really like this series, but for me the blurring occurs too often... In my opinion, the child tinkers with it too much...

    Ch 206 Sol's First Time (18+ NSFW)
    Reality Bender System, Marvel
    Anime & Comics · Alex_Simmonds
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  • Egox_Pro
    Egox_Pro4mth
    Commented

    I showed this picture earlier, it's my favorite Siori :)

    Ch 123 Idol Arc: Preparation-2(Arriving in Wind Country)
    Naruto: Corrupting my Naruto
    Anime & Comics · SolaceViolet
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  • Egox_Pro
    Egox_Pro4mth
    Commented

    I would continue here...

    Ch 117 Epilogue to Volume 3.5(I)
    Naruto: Corrupting my Naruto
    Anime & Comics · SolaceViolet
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  • Egox_Pro
    Egox_Pro4mth
    Commented

    I found this picture by accident. Adult Shiori ;D

    Ch 105 Boruto Time Travel Arc-8
    Naruto: Corrupting my Naruto
    Anime & Comics · SolaceViolet
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  • Egox_Pro
    Egox_Pro5mth
    Commented

    Please continue writing this version, when you write it, think about the second version...

    Ch 94 Version 2
    Naruto: Corrupting my Naruto
    Anime & Comics · SolaceViolet
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  • Egox_Pro
    Egox_Pro6mth
    Commented

    Nice manipulator... It would be nice to see Shiori as the last boss of the series, who is powerful and manipulates everyone... It wouldn't make the series worse because it is OP, in fact it would be more interesting... I don't like weak characters... So what if she's smart, she'll destroy you if you want to go somewhere and you have to carry meat with you in the form of bodyguards... So please don't make her weak, Mr. Author...

    Ch 82 Uchiha Itachi's Final appearance
    Naruto: Corrupting my Naruto
    Anime & Comics · SolaceViolet
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  • Egox_Pro
    Egox_Pro6mth
    Commented

    Certainly option 2, I hate it when the author humiliates his characters, it turns me off from all series, I almost gave up on this series for the last few chapters, Shiori can be OP why not, and Izumi can be her slave/servant...

    Ch 101 Opinion Poll (With Result)
    Naruto: Corrupting my Naruto
    Anime & Comics · SolaceViolet
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  • Egox_Pro
    Egox_Pro6mth
    Commented

    Overall, this story has lost a lot in my eyes over the last few chapters, now I don't like it so much... I know that it is the author who shapes the stories, but I hate series in which the main character is bullied by the author when he at the beginning it creates him as someone great in the future... It's the worst thing you can do...

    Ch 71 Main Characters for the Third Volume
    Naruto: Corrupting my Naruto
    Anime & Comics · SolaceViolet
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  • Egox_Pro
    Egox_Pro6mth
    Replied to S_P_1499

    I think exactly the same, my friend...

    Ch 71 Main Characters for the Third Volume
    Naruto: Corrupting my Naruto
    Anime & Comics · SolaceViolet
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  • Egox_Pro
    Egox_Pro6mth
    Commented

    You had to turn Izumi into a copy of Siori, I understand that this is caused by absorbing Shiori's energy, but in my opinion it's a bit distasteful... It's nice that Shiori regained access to chakra, but I still don't like the way it was done and the fact that you had to shame her like that... Now you're making her a victim instead of Saske, just to have an excuse to bring Tsunade to the village to heal her and become Hokage...

    Ch 69 What happened after
    Naruto: Corrupting my Naruto
    Anime & Comics · SolaceViolet
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  • Egox_Pro
    Egox_Pro6mth
    Commented

    I still don't like this plot device... I don't like Izumi's character at all, you could have let Shiori absorb her, at least sparing her would have been justified... I don't like that she found out about the canon, it's the worst thing that can happen...

    Ch 68 Shiori vs Izumi(Rewrite)
    Naruto: Corrupting my Naruto
    Anime & Comics · SolaceViolet
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  • Egox_Pro
    Egox_Pro6mth
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    Please stop doing this... Do you know that you are humiliating the main character? I really don't like it... I'm really considering abandoning this novella...

    Ch 67 Aftermath
    Naruto: Corrupting my Naruto
    Anime & Comics · SolaceViolet
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