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he got a sacred blood one a while back and used it to enter ji yanran's room and to hunt an armadillo like creature for a shield beast soul..... just saying.... it is a camouflage beast soul.
you have made his very poor background known and have made it a point to tell us many many times... how exactly could he have experienced this tea before? if he has never experienced the tea before, how does he know what it feels like to drink it; let alone know that it is the grade necessary for a visiting dignitary.
he sat there and let it bite him for 6 hours...... what conditions are you talking about?
the backbone of any faction is the laborers... not the protectors.
I thought sandalwood was the lowest tier and you just introduced another under it? when? why?
12 paragraphs all saying the same thing in a different way......
why am I reading this multiple times?
you literally just finished describing the claws, and now a bear has hooves?
if it didn't pierce his body then how did he pull it out?
this process would also make some very low quality steel and even less high quality. (quality being the amount of things it can be used for ie low=few)
the fact that I am okay skipping this entire paragraph while reading your story is not a good thing.
I don't think that word means what you think it means.
did he forget about his girl?
if they aren't moving like people then they aren't people ... fuckn' kill it!!!
is his will really this weak?
organization?
there is a sentence here that doesnt need to be here
them?