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BlueBolz2o014dCommentedmade in china?
"nn…Chupp… Kou-kun… what are you gonna do if I'm pregnant?" Satomi couldn't help but ask with a teasing smile on her face. In the end, she already prepared herself with pills. Also, it was a pill that was recommended by her colleague who had already had two children. It said that it was quite expensive, but 100% working. It was made by an ancestor from china.- BlueBolz2o015dCommented
braid and trauma? ah i see. .. .
"That's why—this novel should be in this library." A guy with straight black hair that cover his forehead and wearing glasses explained with long speech to a petite and plain girl with chest-lenght black hair tied in low twin braids with bang hanging on the right side. If someone with an otakuish hobby from another world saw her, it may trigger some PTSD. - BlueBolz2o027dCommented
so many hornies😂
(A/N: Thank you all for 100k reads. I truly appreciate it. These next two chapters with Laki will be quite short. So I apologize. As mentioned before, I'll do the Patreon order in the weekend.) - BlueBolz2o02mthReplied to crimson666devil
different laws of worlds but possible if the author wants to
And whoever asked for Enel's body forgot to request the full Haki package and instead requested that the consumption of physical strength using the power of the devil fruit be reduced to zero. So, apart from a devil fruit ability with no weakness that also wouldn't tire him, he only possessed the "Mantra" ability, which made him the equivalent of a sensor ninja. He didn't even have a golden staff with him. - BlueBolz2o02mthCommentedAlthough they are all well-known experts, Rasa believes that he can hold his own in a one-on-one fight against them. After all, if it weren't for Orochimaru relying on Kimimaro, who was at the Kage level, it wouldn't have been so easy to kill him. And Orochimaru has the loudest reputation among the Sannin, so he shouldn't be weaker than Jiraiya and Tsunade in comparison, right?
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it doesn't matter to me, if naruto is a she or a he. And if you want to satisfy both readers, i suggest to create a female version of naruto with his evil side, he have a system anyway so he will become op soon/later and will be able to create some technique to turn her(evil naruto) to a female human. But you may already have a story in mind, so you could just use that it may ruin your creativity and imagination to how your story will progress. Ps: just a suggestion, it's better to have mc some kind of goal, just like on the og, at the beginning of the story, naruto wants to be recognize then sasuke defected, then his goal shifted on bringing him back on the village.
What do you all think of Naruko and Satsuki? - BlueBolz2o02mthCommentedItsuki and Kushina were lying on the sofa cuddling, Itsuki was wearing a plain white shirt and had his chest open. Kushina who was lying on his chest placed tender and affectionate kisses on his pecs from time to time causing Itsuki to let out a comfortable hum while stroking her hair.
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he forgot his wife?
" Sensei... Shun... Minato.... What should I do? " Hiruzen asked himself in a sorrowful voice. - BlueBolz2o02mthReplied to Dnnhhh
that's also a possible plot
As for Nature transformation, the advice given by Asuma might be useful, even though he is a waste at least he is useful in this way. - BlueBolz2o02mthReplied to ALEX1402
naruto with a slight perverted system
'But It was big' Thinking up to this Kushina felt her face get redder and just rolled around again. - BlueBolz2o02mthCommented
her ability is more on physical talent than a techniques with use of chakra. And to be honest u think her ability have more potential. Like she can see water droplets from far away and still can see the reflection of others in there. So the statement that she could see far away with water droplets contradict how her ability is used. Well shes's just a side character why would the author gives her more screen time/chapters to show her full potential.
No offense to Yome but that Doujutsu would make him look like a crack addict if he used it. - BlueBolz2o02mthReplied to SuryaputraKarna
sounds good for arrows and bow
[ Yome Doujutsu ] - BlueBolz2o02mthCommented' Arent you just fussing over nothing' A mature feminine voice resounded inside her head making her seeth in annoyance.
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it's okay no need to be hard on yourself, being able to wrote a chapter already deserve a praise. Just keep up the hard work and you'll get progress👍😁 👍
Whoa 😲 this chapter was pretty hard to write , due to all the emotions needed to be portrayed I really tried my best please don't flame me 🥲 - BlueBolz2o02mthCommented
all of male uchiha is hateable in the series lol, only female uchiha aren't shown to be like them.
I despise Itachi , a person who can murder his mom is not someone I can admire , nah I don't wanna hear shit from Itachi fanboys who are trying to cope with the bs of him having no choice. - BlueBolz2o02mthCommentedHe raised his goblet to the air as if to toast.
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so gender bender naruto?
It's not like he didn't know what the fate of a Jinchuriki is. But still, he chose to do it anyway, what did he expect? Would the villagers treat his daughter as some Hero? Naruko was lucky her mother was alive otherwise Mikoto couldn't imagine the fate, the young child would experience. - BlueBolz2o02mthCommented
and in canon, it's suspicious that kushina got kidnapped while being inside konoha and being a freaking jinchuriki! Like seriously, she's the jinchuriki of kyubi and there's no anbu protecting her in the shadows? and to freaking coincidence minato just happen to save her.
She knew Kushina never had anyone she could truly call family or friends, and after Minato passed away that became glaringly obvious. For Kushina who lost her whole clan and came to a new village with strangers, Minato could be considered an emotional pillar tying her to this place. - BlueBolz2o02mthReplied to Sidney008
grind is layf
This cycle repeated during the duration of the meal, good thing the former had his mind elsewhere. - BlueBolz2o02mthReplied to Fleeting_dreams
why does it's look likes that shes's holding her puss* rather than her stomach?
' I'll be sure to burn a few more incense on your grave Asuma ' Itsuki thought to himself righteously.