ohh... i see, i seee. it shamble idea... i will adjust it thank you.

:) thank you, i appreciate.

This is good! Added on collection... :) hahaha

thank you

it was good, i really like this! why i'm a bird, hahahh.... over all perfect.

thank you for your feedback. yeah, readers feel like a god.

i really like the concept. it was good !

this is good! i really like it!

if multiple pov put name/who it is before the scene.

This is good ! i added to my collection, hahaha

This is nice

Hell, yeah... nice... not bad and too short.

thank you :)

It was good ! I really like it. :) Keep up, I'm rooting on you.

opo. thank you! proud pinoy, tayo

Thank you.

It was good, but too short. This is nice. Similar to typical game as usual but still excellent.