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Daniel_Daye_01821yrCommentedI gotta be honest, I’m getting lost in these spelling errors during the descriptions and chapters. I know you gotta type these up by a deadline or something to that effect, but is there a way that a proofread or comp check could be done prior to posting? Love the story
Ch 1025 Chapter 961: In the Kitchen- Daniel_Daye_01822yrCommented
If we*
"If you join your crew, what's our share in pillages?" Both Michael and Gaya were surprised by the pirate's question. They were expecting questions related to the curse yet the short one asked about their share. - Daniel_Daye_01822yrCommented
Ok heihachi Mishima lol
''Lightning Style!'' Abyss quickly went into his fighting stance with his left leg being in front and his right leg behind with his left arm stretched forwards, and his right arm touching his waist. - Daniel_Daye_01822yrCommented
Depending on the boss you are going for and if its gonna be overpowered then it should be something that will make Zach struggle especially if he’s trying to protect Victoria and Aria…how about Belphegor?
Author's Note- Suggest some boss names for the dungeon raid. - Daniel_Daye_01822yrCommented
Poppy not poopy lol
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Isn’ it supposed to be the third person not the second twice?
The second person was the young man, who the second young man was speaking with. He had a pale blond hair and a fairly muscular stature. In this carriage, he was the only who got a manly face. - Daniel_Daye_01822yrCommented
Shouldn’t it be Vampire King?
Having to go in by himself wasn't an issue for the Vampire Lord. Honestly, Quinn thought it was for the best, as he had his own Shadow ability. He could always use it to get out by himself, so bringing someone else along just meant there was more chance of something happening to them. - Daniel_Daye_01822yrCommented
Prince Kirigan fell*
The moment they saw the pulverization of their prince from a specific being merely spamming the throw of his Galaxy, some were too shaken as the Obsidian Panther used this time to split apart the skull of another being, the Colossal Helios Leviathan and the Void Serpent doing something similar as they released horrendous attacks that caused the downfall of another 3 Low Tier GALAXY experts just seconds after Price Kirigan fell! - Daniel_Daye_01822yrCommented
Suppression*
[Bloodline Supression]. - Daniel_Daye_01822yrCommented
Came across a familiar scene*
When he ventured in slightly deeper, he came across a family scene of the shockingly dense condensation of Universal law essence around him, his eyes looking a few meters away as he finally came face to face with an Obsidian Core very much similar to the one he saw in the Novus Galaxy. - Daniel_Daye_01822yrCommented
Ranked*
When she told how he had killed the QUASAR raked Fiend Rulers, the Imperial Adjudicator had nearly disputed her words with disbelief! - Daniel_Daye_01822yrCommented
Her*
Hey immense power that was a realm higher wrapped around Vredral as he was completely incapacitated, his gaze wrathfully shaking as he looked towards her. - Daniel_Daye_01822yrCommented
Despair and* disbelief
The Commanders of the Witches Castle watched on helplessly as they tried to fight off the enormous Blades of Liberation attacking them on all sides, their bodies still trying to fight off the fate essence that was sticking to them like glue. They watched on in despair ad disbelief as the golden light being released from this singular shining star in the starry expanse of space washed over their forces, each of them becoming colored gold as the same terrifying essence that they were fighting covered their people in the tens of thousands! - Daniel_Daye_01822yrCommented
“Who” thinks they are worthy?
"Many fragments of the old order remain scattered, yet the notable figures remain hidden. Just when will you show yourselves? I know that you have made an appearance once again from the reestablishment of the household. My question to you is... just how thinks they are so worthy?!" - Daniel_Daye_01822yrCommented
Being followed, not behind followed
"Are we perhaps behind followed?" - Daniel_Daye_01822yrCommented
Making saetyhn wonder how
Again, a bunch of nonsensical murmured circulated the room, making Saehtyn how any of these fools managed to become a Lord. Each of them focused on inane things! - Daniel_Daye_01822yrCommented
Not kong but long
Apollo's aura surged, the barrier containing his aura shattering incrementally. It wouldn't be kong before he experienced the evolution of a Great Demon. - Daniel_Daye_01822yrCommented
If you still Don’t* understand not down
"Oh, that's an easy fix. You aren't human anymore so you can't do this as you did when you were a human. From this moment forward, you're what is known as a demon. If you still down understand, think of yourself as an invader of this world," Apollo replied almost too nonchalantly. - Daniel_Daye_01822yrCommented
You can all “greet” me not great.
"For the next year, I'll be the instructor of your 92nd group. You can all great me as Instructor Sapphyr," Sapphyr announced while leading her section of no more than 50 students inside. While doing so, she spoke again, "You all are just the seeded category. Next year, you'll come to realize that there are other classifications that go far beyond seeded. I will do my best to elevate you to your greatest potential." - Daniel_Daye_01822yrCommented
Say that 5 times fast lol
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