The story is worth a five star, you can see the efforts that was placed in creating the world background, the characters are loveable and the plot is great. Your story has a lot of potential and i wish you good luck author.
I must say after reading the first few chapters, i know that your story will be great and i hope to see more books form you, keep up the good work and congrats on your third wsa entry.
Lips: rose, soft pink, They say perfection is a moving target, a mirage. Yet, when she spoke, her lips look very real. The perfect symmetry along the cupid bow.., looks like god was drunk when he made her.
There is not much to read ,but one this is for sure and that is, this story has potential sis, i love the way you described the princess and it seems we have another dashing prince, i would love to put this in my library to see what the other chapters will look like.
Your story deserves a five star for sure. Nice start from the beginning, everything is explained well and in detail. It is a a refreshing read, even the cover is attractive. Kudos to the author.