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I see the darkness in all things, yet I yearn for the light.
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You know what’s really terrifying about Whitebeard learning from this Manga. The title is “Biography of Heracles” from the Fate series. This means that Whitebeard is learning from the original Heracles. To put into perspective this means Whitebeard is capable of gaining 12 lives, but that’s not the part that terrifies me. This is Biography of Heracles, not Biography of Berserker Heracles. This means the powers of True Archer Heracles is also at his disposal. True Archer Heracles is a beast that makes Berserker Heracles look like a child. That power in Whitebeards hands, yeah the Marines are finished.
Can the Next Manga Zoro reads be Berserk. I honestly can’t picture any other Manga that Zoro can benefit from. He has the Sword, the Power and the Technique, all he needs now is the experience and a way to strengthen his blade further. The demons of Berserk will give him the experience, and bathing the Wado Ichimonji in the Blood of a thousand Demons will allow it to transcend the physical into the astral. Now I know that because The wado is now a Zanpakutou, that power up would seem redundant. Yet I think you could spin it to mean something greater. Maybe the power up could give Wado the ability to ignore immortality. Honestly I’m just guessing, still the Experience of Berserk would put Zoro in a whole new realm.
I’m not frustrated, in fact I find it incredible that you managed to get the story this far. In all honesty I’m glad, the story was getting stale and I honestly expected burnout or a hiatus much sooner. By all means take as much time as you want, I’m grateful with what you’ve given.
The quality of a story takes a nose dive when death becomes irrelevant. The Valkyries thing was already pushing it, this would just further destroy this story. The power fantasy is already ridiculous enough, but making death irrelevant will just make this story boring.
Gonna be honest here, I don't think you've put much thought into this multiverse organization storyline. Things have been nothing but good for peter that it's becoming stale, and this multiverse arc feels like it's going to be handled extremely poorly. Multiverse is a Pandora's box that no amount of power will ever equate to a positive outcome. There's an infinite number of factors that Peter isn't accounting for that seem like will be swept under the rug just so this power fantasy can continue. Look at any media that deals with Multiverse hoping individuals and you'll see first hand that no amount of preparation will ever be enough. Peter seems to immature with the way he's handling everything that it should have blown up in his face ages ago. I like this story don't get me wrong, it's just now it's getting repetitive and this multiverse arc is going to be much the same.
This is what I love of Creative one Piece Fan fics. When authors focus on just how busted a power is. I can’t stand power stacking, it’s lazy and absolutely annoying. However taking one power and finding a thousand uses for it, is the stuff I can’t get enough of. Seeing how busted the Smoke fruit can be, even when it’s categorized as a god fruit is still enjoyable.
I actually like Stan Edgar, really hope Spider Man doesn’t kill him. Cause seriously, this solving everyone’s problems thing is losing its initial luster. What Peter should be doing guiding key figures, not instantly solve everything and then dip. Terrible consequences arise from that, and the initial help provide amounts to nothing in the end when it’s washed away in less competent people’s hands.
I think Peter should turn this world into a multiversal hub. His very own world in which he can train the citizens to travel the multiverse. With the population drastically lowered, it’s the perfect world for Peter to Claim as his own. Also he should set up a Tv with Infinite channels like from Rick and Morty.
My vote for the Honeymoon. If you’re gonna touch on Mechs, I say go to Evangelion, that world is in desperate need of saving, and Shinji needs a proper role model than the idiots that think putting insurmountable pressure on a teen is a smart idea. For a proper Honeymoon to an anime world, my vote is the Fate Stay Night. Their Magic System would be a great benefit to Spider-Man, as their system is built on finesse as opposed to over powered. Their limited magic forced them to refine their mastery over magecraft, and pushed them to use very little to accomplish a lot. Peter can learn a lot of refinement for his magic and powers.
I truly enjoy your brand of storytelling. While it’s not the best I’ve read, it’s honestly rather soothing to read. There’s a sense of tranquility to it that most stories fail to grasp. I’m looking forward to more updates and hope that this story isn’t one you plan to abandon. It’s honestly a gem in my opinion.
Is it wrong that during the next spider verse event that Web of Dragons Peter appears and both challenges and defeats Ultimate Peter for title of strongest Spider-Man. It’d be even funnier if WoD Peter says he’s trained with the Sayians and this causes Ultimate Peter to start freaking out.
Not gonna lie, I always believed Zoro is Vice captain of the straw hats, mostly because when it comes down to it he’s the one who puts his foot down when Luffy doesn’t know his place. However this story has a competent Luffy, so I don’t Think Zoro would be good Vice captain Material. This Luffy doesn’t need someone to say the tough things that need to be said. What this Luffy needs for a Vice Captain is someone with the ambition to stand next to him and command the Crew. Zoro could do it, but this Zoro strikes me as the kind that wants to focus on his ambition to be the greatest Swordsman and protect the Crew, not lead it. Which is why I’m hoping Law joins the Crew and becomes Vice Captain, he’s everything Luffy needs in a second in command, and as an already established Captain he has the experience. But this is my opinion and I’m fine either way, I’m still enjoying the story.
You focus on yourself and settling your peace of mind, however long it may take. Don’t let anyone tell you otherwise, and take as long as you need. Whether you choose to continue or abandon this story, is nobody else’s business but your own. Get better soon, I’ll pray for you.