love it the characters seam real and the world feels alive the monsters are creative and the power system is simple well all so being expansive the wrighting is great the new chapters are the highlight of my day 10/10

the story is good so far and I love the little bits of comedy that pop up throughout so so far if say it's a great read for a cultivation novel

glad to hear from you was getting worried cant whate fore the next upload

thanks for the chapter and am glad you can take the criticism and improve by the way you called the dragonair dragonite a couple of times

ty for the chapter

thanks for the chapter love that last line

thanks for the suprise upload

all good thanks for the info

thanks for the chapter and it looked fine to me

love it thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

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a great start to world building and relly good writing as well. I'm excited to ride this train to the end. It's worth the read best pokemon fanfic iv read so far