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  • chocolate_gums
    chocolate_gums28d
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    Gracias por el capítulo.

    Ch 42 Chapter forty-two: High Council.
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    ASOIAF/GOT: Minecraft in Essos.
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    chocolate_gums1mth
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    gracias por el capítulo.

    Ch 41 Chapter forty-one: A Well-deserved rest.
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  • chocolate_gums
    chocolate_gums1mth
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    thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 37 Chapter thirty-seven: What are cities facing the tide?
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    chocolate_gums1mth
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    gracias por el capítulo

    Ch 35 Chapter Thirty-Five: The world changes too fast.
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  • chocolate_gums
    chocolate_gums1mth
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    Now, even if the armies of the free cities unite, they will not be able to against an entire Dothraki armored body of two hundred thousand men. And I like. hahaha

    Ch 32 Chapter Thirty-Two: New Dawn is Coming
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  • chocolate_gums
    chocolate_gums2mth
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    TFTC, a question, Does Azrael's presence cause the magic to grow? since from what I understood, elysio or whatever his name is mentions that Azrael is a source of magic.

    Ch 31 Chapter Thirty-One: More dangers lurk.
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  • chocolate_gums
    chocolate_gums2mth
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    TFTC, so far the introduction of the love interest looks good.

    Ch 30 Chapter thirty: [Interlude] Losing everything.
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  • chocolate_gums
    chocolate_gums2mth
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    Gracias por el capítulo.

    Ch 29 Chapter twenty-nine: Real Power.
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    ASOIAF/GOT: Minecraft in Essos.
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  • chocolate_gums
    chocolate_gums2mth
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    I love your story, it's as addictive as chocolate gummies, any chance for a Patreon?

    Ch 27 Chapter Twenty-seven: [Interlude] Webs are spun.
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  • chocolate_gums
    chocolate_gums2mth
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    Gracias por tu gran esfuerzo.

    Ch 25 Chapter Twenty-Five: Flies always get to the sweet stuff.
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  • chocolate_gums
    chocolate_gums2mth
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    Wow, this surprised me quite a bit, I went in wanting to give it a chance as there was another family themed story but the author went down the drain, however; so far this doesn't happen here, the author is learning to live in a world like Asoiaf, he has a big power but he doesn't make it Op, the chapters are long and the updating is good, plus the writing is immersive and entertaining, and although there are two or three small mistakes in one or another chapter, it's understandable as the author is French, but that doesn't bother the reading, so yes, if you're looking for something fresh and new, read it.

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    chocolate_gums1yr
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    thank you very much for the chapters, you have improved enormously, much respect

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    chocolate_gums1yr
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    I sincerely think that Kinvara is at least doing well for MC, and maybe that way he can help him correct his arrogance and arrogance

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  • chocolate_gums
    chocolate_gums1yr
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    While I'm not opposed to the relationship with Kinvara, I feel like it's too forced, especially in the way you added her to the story.

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  • chocolate_gums
    chocolate_gums1yr
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    This is without a doubt one of the best stories I've read set in the world of Game of Thrones, the development of the story is on a very good path, the update stability, and the character development, that last one is what I like the most. We went from seeing the Mc of a man with a 21st century mentality, With an 'honorable' ethic of said date, But thanks to the events we see that his mentality changes, he grows as a person, he adapts too quickly to the new world because he knows that if he doesn't he can die. Creating massacres and killing people in order to fulfill their objectives, without a doubt a great story so far. I just hope you keep up the good work, while there is room for improvement in grammar, it doesn't take away from the fact that the author knows what he's doing so far.

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  • chocolate_gums
    chocolate_gums1yr
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    Thank you very much for the chapter

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  • chocolate_gums
    chocolate_gums1yr
    Commented

    how long until the Mc conquers Myr, Lys and the disputed lands?

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  • chocolate_gums
    chocolate_gums1yr
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    En sí la historia es algo poco común, la gramática hay que mejorarla un poco, el mc está sin desarrollo, a parte de saber que es alguien decidido a hacer lo que quiere sin importar asesinar al que se le enfrente, la historia no muestra algo más sobre su personalidad, sin embargo la historia es muy buena para pasar el tiempo.

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  • chocolate_gums
    chocolate_gums1yr
    Commented

    Gracias por el capítulo

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  • chocolate_gums
    chocolate_gums2yr
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    It would be strategic to occupy the territories of what was Gran Colombia, it would be a pass to the Panama Canal, the oil wells of Venezuela, the large amounts of fresh water in Colombia and access to the Pacific and the Caribbean.

    Ch 533 Tractors, Potatoes, and Revenge
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    Tyranny of Steel
    History · Zentmeister
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