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Wow, this surprised me quite a bit, I went in wanting to give it a chance as there was another family themed story but the author went down the drain, however; so far this doesn't happen here, the author is learning to live in a world like Asoiaf, he has a big power but he doesn't make it Op, the chapters are long and the updating is good, plus the writing is immersive and entertaining, and although there are two or three small mistakes in one or another chapter, it's understandable as the author is French, but that doesn't bother the reading, so yes, if you're looking for something fresh and new, read it.
thank you very much for the chapters, you have improved enormously, much respect
I sincerely think that Kinvara is at least doing well for MC, and maybe that way he can help him correct his arrogance and arrogance
While I'm not opposed to the relationship with Kinvara, I feel like it's too forced, especially in the way you added her to the story.
This is without a doubt one of the best stories I've read set in the world of Game of Thrones, the development of the story is on a very good path, the update stability, and the character development, that last one is what I like the most. We went from seeing the Mc of a man with a 21st century mentality, With an 'honorable' ethic of said date, But thanks to the events we see that his mentality changes, he grows as a person, he adapts too quickly to the new world because he knows that if he doesn't he can die. Creating massacres and killing people in order to fulfill their objectives, without a doubt a great story so far. I just hope you keep up the good work, while there is room for improvement in grammar, it doesn't take away from the fact that the author knows what he's doing so far.
Thank you very much for the chapter
how long until the Mc conquers Myr, Lys and the disputed lands?
En sí la historia es algo poco común, la gramática hay que mejorarla un poco, el mc está sin desarrollo, a parte de saber que es alguien decidido a hacer lo que quiere sin importar asesinar al que se le enfrente, la historia no muestra algo más sobre su personalidad, sin embargo la historia es muy buena para pasar el tiempo.
Gracias por el capítulo