This book has an interesting story line, some funny moments, the author uses a great way to discribe the surroundings and little details of what's happening and carefully chooses words. I'm excited to read ad more!

Interesting read, something new to me. That last part of chapter two had me laughing.

Love it! Been waiting for them to come together in the story!

Interesting read! This story has some potential. Pulls a reader in and makes you want to find out what's next! To me it seemed unique and the more I read, the more interesting it gets!

Nice, very detailed, makes me imagine the scene and the story. Would make a great movie!

Separating two stories with "chapters" helps reader understand that later in the book they collide into one.

Excited to read more!

Interesting though, but could use a little more plots and twists. And maybe not repeat the whole thing but start out as if it would repeat and ad these"...... " definitely keep working on it! It has a potential! Be sure to spell check too 😊 great job!