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I mean, wasn't he trying to be normal/go with the feelings? Seems arbitrary to the reader as to why he wouldn't return the kind feelings atleast. He would also probably be pestered a lot less if he at least talked to his brother because it doesn't look like he's one that would just leave if you ignore him long enough :O,
Honestly, its a really good novel so far. You've got great pace, pretty detailed world building and overall I don't have any particular complaints about the writing, but this paragraph comments is really getting hard to follow tbh. I wish you didn't have to do it but I understand, sadly I'll probably not be reading those sections anymore because it definitely breaks the flow of my reading and it's another thing that will distract me as I'm trying to enjoy the story. Hopefully it's just some extra world building that I won't be too sad to miss out on, but if the novel stops making sense, I probably will end up stopping because it defeats the whole immersive aspect :(
you look so stupid. if only you had read a little bit more.
Didn't the method spread last time? It was heavily implied in the previous chapters that this mission wasn't taken by anyone till it was too late which led to the method of demon subjugation and stuff spreading. So if Noel didn't rescue them in the last life, and if they were fed to the demon as were the others, how'd they form the Blue Rose Merc group?
This guy sometimes acts waay too low-key, borderline idiot territory. By becoming a medical ninja, he would get more chances to mind read higher level Ninja's while treating them and he could have his signature greeting after healing be a pat or something. Make it his quirk or shit, but then the rewards he would get from actual Ninja's instead of civillians would be so much better, he said so himself didn't he? At the same time he would also get training and meet new and new ninjas everyday. This story is almost entirely a rehash of canon background with maybe 2 minor differences. Every single thing otherwise is same and its getting annoying reading about stuff that I have already watched the anime for. I wanted a new Naruto, not a history lesson.
Oh my god. It was so hard to get a FP that would actually work on this, due to my irregular reading, I barely got a Fast Pass so that I could read this chapter and it was great! Definitely see the potential of this new ability, especially since it scales o.o