I shivered at the smile at the end keep it up

Thanks for the chapter 💜

I like the way this is going keep it up

I like the way this story is going keep it up

I don’t know what you could do to get more motivated I would recommend a break or something sorry for the mediocre advice 👍

+1

Thanks for the chap ter

Welcome back 👍

Love the book keep it up 👍

Good luck man

Cant really give you that much constructive criticism because of how little there is but maybe shorting her name from saber alter to something shorter it’s kinda off puting to read it but do this later on like when she gets turned into a devil or something other than that it was smooth to read also add more tags it will show you book in more areas

Like the start can’t wait for more

Can ’t lol Webnovel always messes that up

Can’ wait for more content

Love this keep it up

Finally

After

Like the main character keep it up 👍

Reminds me of a fanfic called “think before you wish” hope you continue it will read 👍

Nice chapter can’t wait for the next one 👍👍