I think it's a really great start. I would love to read more. Keep sharing more amazing content like this. Being a beginner there is a lot more than this and all these experiences will lead a writer like you to do more productive stuff. I really enjoyed this story based on the character "Sherleen" and how she managed to make it all as she wanted it to be. The story has a really good start as being a poor girl with a lot of ambition and chasing her life goals; how she always wanted her parents to live life as they wish to. Leading with all the highlights the story's main motive is really interesting and it will make us curious enough to read more and more. Keep it up! :)

I really liked the concept. ❤ Keep going with the flow :)