Does the chapter still have repeated paragraphs or needs editing for anyone ?

so many warning bells going off in my head right now

my heart has been thoroughly shredded, this chapter hurt

happy new year !!

it's okay it happens

I shall re-read in the meantime while I wait 🧡

Punching the air for seren right now. She must've felt so powerless at the time and Martha telling her to control her emotions make this so much more sad. She was just a little girl I can't imagine how much it hurt her and the poor girl who was punished in her stead. But she doesn't need to do that anymore I cannot wait to see transform into a powerful queen.

This chapter illicited such a strong response from me. I was on edge the entire time reading it and I'm now very worried about Prudence and how she'll react.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

It's so hard to find a story that really keeps you absorbed in the plot but this always delivers. I always look forward to updates now I'm just waiting for the one that will explain everything, that will make everything make sense.