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Dark_Knight_9670

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  • Dark_Knight_9670
    Dark_Knight_96703yr
    Commented

    berserk mode.

    Ch 17 "Crap, I almost died!"
    Mage's Fate [Discontinued]
    Fantasy · Moon_Eater_Serpent
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  • Dark_Knight_9670
    Dark_Knight_96703yr
    Posted

    I've seen some typographical errors (the author probably missed them). But I've seen no problem with grammar. Description is good too, for me. As for the story, I initially thought it was about "a non-mage struggling in the world of magic" and that the title is out of place, or whatever. But it's wrong. I want others to read it too so I won't say.... What I can say is that the story is probably unique. I don't know if there's a web novel out there with a similar plot...

    Mage's Fate [Discontinued]
    Fantasy · Moon_Eater_Serpent
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  • Dark_Knight_9670
    Dark_Knight_96703yr
    Commented

    good fight scene, very detailed. But why didn't he used his relic? haha

    Ch 12 "Just got used to it"
    Mage's Fate [Discontinued]
    Fantasy · Moon_Eater_Serpent
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  • Dark_Knight_9670
    Dark_Knight_96703yr
    Commented

    genius mc + OP weapon... hahah... I think the sword is cool... I want to see how he uses it.

    Ch 7 The Inheritance
    Mage's Fate [Discontinued]
    Fantasy · Moon_Eater_Serpent
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  • Dark_Knight_9670
    Dark_Knight_96703yr
    Commented

    I was wondering why "Mage's Fate" when the mc is not a mage... i understand now...

    Ch 6 Glin's Decision
    Mage's Fate [Discontinued]
    Fantasy · Moon_Eater_Serpent
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  • Dark_Knight_9670
    Dark_Knight_96703yr
    Commented

    added ; )

    Ch 3 Dennis' Provocation
    Mage's Fate [Discontinued]
    Fantasy · Moon_Eater_Serpent
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