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Red_Flame_Spectre

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I like fantasy novels, mostly about magic

2021-05-29 JoinedGlobal
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  • Red_Flame_Spectre
    Red_Flame_Spectre3yr
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    thanks for the chapter... : )

    Ch 22 Parting Ways
    Mage's Fate [Discontinued]
    Fantasy · Moon_Eater_Serpent
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  • Red_Flame_Spectre
    Red_Flame_Spectre3yr
    Replied to Red_Flame_Spectre

    I've made a mistake, it wasn't "chapter 11," but "chapter 12" ... ugh sorry everyone.

    Mage's Fate [Discontinued]
    Fantasy · Moon_Eater_Serpent
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  • Red_Flame_Spectre
    Red_Flame_Spectre3yr
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    So far, I've read until chap. 11 and now I'm already excited. I think its doing good, especially on the fight scenes which are very detailed. Honestly, the mc's actions/moves remind of Naruto characters. The mc's actions in chap. 3 are realistic and still normal, but in chap. 11, I imagined something really cool. The descriptions and narrations are very detailed. Also, the world of the story is probably well-thought, with things like 'thousands of years history,' 'mysterious places,' 'strange creatures,' and 'magic system and magical science' which i appreciate. But I don't understand the 'magic system' fully yet, probably because it's intended by the author while looking at the mc's situation. As for the author's writing quality, I can't assess very much (because I'm more observant to the story plots) but all I can say is 'it can still improve.'

    Mage's Fate [Discontinued]
    Fantasy · Moon_Eater_Serpent
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  • Red_Flame_Spectre
    Red_Flame_Spectre3yr
    Commented

    Glin's not a loser after all... haha. I'm adding this story to my library. ; )

    Ch 3 Dennis' Provocation
    Mage's Fate [Discontinued]
    Fantasy · Moon_Eater_Serpent
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