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Jaison_Arbor

Jaison_Arbor

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"The world is made up of stories, not atoms."

2021-05-26 JoinedPakistan
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  • Jaison_Arbor
    Jaison_Arbor10mth
    Commented

    Pink was never innocent 馃憖

    The repetitive action was causing Varya to quickly lose control, she felt pressure build up in her lower stomach as he brought her closer to climax. This situation was not what she was expecting, but him taking control was better than anything she could have imagined on her own. With his dominating personality, it would only make sense that he would prefer to be dominant in the bedroom.
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    A Lady Does It Better
    Sci-fi RomanceQueenFrieza
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  • Jaison_Arbor
    Jaison_Arbor10mth
    Commented

    Idiots

    Unfortunately for Earth, nobody believed the flustered genius when he brought the news to the eyes of everyone. For the first time in his career, his knowledge was questioned. People started doubting his findings and calling him a "mad scientist". The news he was trying to spread didn't catch on in the media and the announcement was ultimately lost in the midst of headlines obsessing over celebrities and other superficialities. Even his own family thought he was probably just overreacting and ignored his warnings to prepare for the worst.
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    A Lady Does It Better
    Sci-fi RomanceQueenFrieza
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  • Jaison_Arbor
    Jaison_Arbor10mth
    Commented

    I'll call the princess "Pink" for a secret purpose 馃槒

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    A Lady Does It Better
    Sci-fi RomanceQueenFrieza
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  • Jaison_Arbor
    Jaison_Arbor10mth
    Commented

    Oh someone knows馃憖

    No one, except Dr. Vance.
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    A Lady Does It Better
    Sci-fi RomanceQueenFrieza
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  • Jaison_Arbor
    Jaison_Arbor10mth
    Commented

    Dumb scientists

    Who could have seen this coming? There wasn't a single scientist on Earth with any idea of what was about to happen.
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    A Lady Does It Better
    Sci-fi RomanceQueenFrieza
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  • Jaison_Arbor
    Jaison_Arbor10mth
    Commented

    The story has potential and is unique too, just a bit more touching here and there and it will be a masterpiece.

    Ch 1 Prologue:
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    Her Assassination
    Sci-fi RomanceNotSubaru
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  • Jaison_Arbor
    Jaison_Arbor10mth
    Commented

    馃ぃ馃ぃ

    "Oh, it's the little pussy cat. You think you can get me this time?"
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    Her Assassination
    Sci-fi RomanceNotSubaru
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  • Jaison_Arbor
    Jaison_Arbor10mth
    Commented

    A villain appeared I see 馃憖

    "Or what, shoot me?"聽
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    Her Assassination
    Sci-fi RomanceNotSubaru
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  • Jaison_Arbor
    Jaison_Arbor10mth
    Commented

    Student life sure is like that.

    The news was nothing new to the girl who was sitting in a train, with her head tilted to the window and sighed.聽
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    Her Assassination
    Sci-fi RomanceNotSubaru
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  • Jaison_Arbor
    Jaison_Arbor10mth
    Posted

    I wasn't into the System novel but man I must say this one piqued the best of my curiosity, you went savage while writing it haha, keep writing man I'll be reading it.

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    God's Era : An Error System
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  • Jaison_Arbor
    Jaison_Arbor10mth
    Commented

    馃拃

    Another 100,000,000 years passed away and the old man Ajax was still sitting in the same place he was sitting 100,000,000 years ago.
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    God's Era : An Error System
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  • Jaison_Arbor
    Jaison_Arbor10mth
    Commented

    馃拃 Yourself!!?

    [Congratulations Host you have completed the mission that you assigned yourself Eleven thousand years ago.]
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    God's Era : An Error System
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  • Jaison_Arbor
    Jaison_Arbor10mth
    Commented

    馃ぃ Man

    <Author Note :- To keyboards with the logic here, it is fantasy so just enjoy it and do not try to use your own logic, it maybe harmful to health, Thank you.>
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  • Jaison_Arbor
    Jaison_Arbor10mth
    Commented

    A Grim reaper? 馃憖

    "Your death that is." While saying so the old man directly blew the door up into tiny little pieces and started to kill all of the people inside.
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    God's Era : An Error System
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  • Jaison_Arbor
    Jaison_Arbor10mth
    Commented

    I'm coming to kill this man now.

    Then.... he crushed her head.
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    God's Era : An Error System
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  • Jaison_Arbor
    Jaison_Arbor10mth
    Commented

    馃拃馃拃

    When the little girl saw her parents dying in front of her she ran towards her parent's dead body and started to shake them as she cried, "Momma papa, please get up don't leave me momma please get up." But to her great disappointment the two dead parents did not react because they were dead, but she who was still young was not going to accept the results so soon.
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    God's Era : An Error System
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  • Jaison_Arbor
    Jaison_Arbor10mth
    Commented

    馃憖

    "No you Monster, you Devil, stop it, please at least spare that little girl she is just 4 years old."
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    God's Era : An Error System
    Fantasylegendary_awesome
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  • Jaison_Arbor
    Jaison_Arbor11mth
    Posted

    The storyline is pretty interesting, the author has done a great job in the description of characters, few grammatical mistakes but they can be solved easily, best of luck author ^-^

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    The Cosplay
    Historical Romanceemaan_Hussain_2035
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  • Jaison_Arbor
    Jaison_Arbor11mth
    Replied to Sunny_Shumail

    It's like worried or highly excited

    Het up Ellen, limped towards the entrance, flung open the door, and bowed in front of the Queen.
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    Whispers Of The Crown
    FantasyJaison_Arbor
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  • Jaison_Arbor
    Jaison_Arbor11mth
    Commented

    Tell me this was sarcasm馃憖

    "I understand that I'm an untalented waste, but why, please tell me WHY(!?) is my placeholder insect the mosquito?" Malaria's eyes almost broke through the trademarked Aburame glasses over his eyes. "Do you understand that the feed of a mosquito is blood? What happens when a mosquito feeds? IT ITCHES! Oh, dear elder, have you ever felt a few hundred mosquito bites under your skin? I'M GOING INSANE AS WE SPEAK!!" he screeched.
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    Naruto: Aburame Malaria
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