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well the story is great yes. the mc is using his whole resources,connections and etc. and also when it came to women he never shy away just like other dumbass protags you can see everywhere and he's not just taking all women as his crew but also recruit men because he knew that having male crew is still essential even tho he divides the men and women and he alone can board where the girls where well its a harem tag so no worries and he already making his forces earlier which is a good thing for him because he already awakend his sun god form and he's fucking OP hahaha guess thats all and oh i'll leave 4 stars for the writing quality because you sometimes forget to put (') or (") when speaking to someone or having his own thoughts because i'm getting confused sometimes. but all in all its good brother author keep it up. i'm poor so i can't give you anything but i really like your fanfic.
why dont you just remove the jason thing hes already nei lei anyway
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