the writer has done awesome work, the story and narration both at their best, the chapter has a few grammatical mistakes but it doesn't make any big effect on the story that are been improved in the further chapters good work author

The story and concept is amazing the way the writter has conveyed his thoughts in words are mind-blowing the characters are beautifully written, I noticed few punctuation mistakes but the story was good enough to sugarcoat it. So , overall beautiful work author

the story and the concept is interesting the imagination of the author is wonderful the narration goes well with the characters and story but there were few grammatical, tense errors I hope the author have fixed those in the Futher chapters overall amazing story good work author

The novel pulls you into deep thoughts and understanding, the narration is smooth and the writing is loving the characters were deep There weren't any mistakes to point out 5 stars for the author Good work

I loved the sweet start of the story, the narration was smooth and easily understandable, there were just a few capitalization mistakes but the story covers it and I guess the author have improved it in further chapters Beautiful work author

well , at first the novel seems like a Thriller but as you advance you'll turn more into its fantasy side the story seems to hide many secrets and mysteries and they concept of not one or two but a million worlds is unique and will always have something interesting to represent