oh MDBF? or AKA? MDBF = My Devil is a Beautiful Female (which is simple the name of this novel) and in the term of AKA it means As known as = AKA

Oh this chapter was good 1 or 2 things seems off but you cover those things very well and keep it yup.

oh batter if you do a proper explanation of the move

OK My Devil Is A Beautiful Female AKA MDBF is the story of a boy name Roy Yagami who wants to become the strongest. While when i was reading it seems like this story is pretty similar to Black Clover... and its give a punch right into my face and said i am different then Black Clover. At first it gives the vibe of Black Clover but after 5-6 chapter it changes the author managed to make it a tad different. While the beginning seems a bit too much like that series. Now onto the writing. It's not bad, but it could definitely improve. The writing feels well (batter then before lol) I feel like the story is becoming a lot better day by day. So just read it

Oh, i think the waiting is worth it. Really batter then before Well, all the best.

Man this good i looking forward for volume 2

Next chapter when??????

Waiting for next chapter thinking who can be :)

I think its good you guys not pushing the main character

Is he kind of Kakashi type?

I also notice that you guys remove all f word nice

what actually means??????? [img=update]

Nice you guys change your name and the style writing You guys improve very well

Nice novel. I thing it will hit someday in future. I suggest you to improve your Writing Quality [img=recommend] And try to describe your fight more and give details about the background Best of luck