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Onica_Smith

Onica_Smith

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2021-05-23 JoinedGlobal
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  • Onica_Smith
    Onica_Smith5mth
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    Do people just leave 6yr olds alone in China is this the norm

    Ch 248 Youyou Was Missing
    One Birth Two Treasures: The Billionaire's Sweet Love
    Urban · Beauty Under the Moon
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  • Onica_Smith
    Onica_Smith5mth
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    She got a degree in what we dont know this story had a great beginning build up. Then there is to much description of the same over and over. It ruined the story that all the sudden she wanted to become an actress. do women in China only want to be performers and entertainers. they should have stuck with her staying in a corporate job she didn't know who he was after she was fired she could have got a job at his office and done the build up that way this story had potential it was ruined by writing being all over the place with no direction and contradictory factors. it's almost like different people wrote it they threw it together without consulting one another. I would love to edit this and make it great it really did have potential

    Ch 156 I want you; are you willing?
    One Birth Two Treasures: The Billionaire's Sweet Love
    Urban · Beauty Under the Moon
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  • Onica_Smith
    Onica_Smith5mth
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    ok this story makes no sense one minute she knows that's the twins dad the next minute she doesn't people don't know who he is because they keep a low profile but his picture is on magazines I already had to skip some chapters cause they really made no sense

    Ch 111 Mu Empire
    One Birth Two Treasures: The Billionaire's Sweet Love
    Urban · Beauty Under the Moon
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  • Onica_Smith
    Onica_Smith1yr
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    WHAT WERE THE WORDS???

    Lu Heting said a few words about Wei Yuxin.
    Hidden Marriage: A Heaven-sent Billionaire Husband
    Urban · SuSuSu Ruyi
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  • Onica_Smith
    Onica_Smith1yr
    Commented

    I love this couple I'm so glad they are back

    However, it was not something to be said but done.
    Hidden Marriage: A Heaven-sent Billionaire Husband
    Urban · SuSuSu Ruyi
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  • Onica_Smith
    Onica_Smith1yr
    Commented

    also what about su bei orphan family in the US why has she not visit her brothers and sisters

    Although Old Master He was disappointed, he didn't blame Lu Heting. Anyway, tonight's focus wasn't on this matter, so he didn't mind.
    Hidden Marriage: A Heaven-sent Billionaire Husband
    Urban · SuSuSu Ruyi
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  • Onica_Smith
    Onica_Smith1yr
    Commented

    when is heiting and the boys comming I miss them from the stories it's almost like su bei is missing half her soul when they are not together. i miss the power couple

    Su Bei was happy and relaxed, so she didn't argue with her.
    Hidden Marriage: A Heaven-sent Billionaire Husband
    Urban · SuSuSu Ruyi
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  • Onica_Smith
    Onica_Smith1yr
    Commented

    these people are so dumb

    "That's right. It's impossible for Master Carlo not to know what's going on with these two works. Let's see what he has to say!"
    Hidden Marriage: A Heaven-sent Billionaire Husband
    Urban · SuSuSu Ruyi
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  • Onica_Smith
    Onica_Smith1yr
    Commented

    how stupid are these art people in art they should definitely be able to tell that shuhui does not paint like that even the people are getting dumber with this story. I'm about to just call it quits and stop giving my money to this one it started out great but is going down hill now that's what happens when authors try to drag on their stories.

    However, they did not know if the person who plagiarized is He Shihui or Su Lu!
    Hidden Marriage: A Heaven-sent Billionaire Husband
    Urban · SuSuSu Ruyi
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  • Onica_Smith
    Onica_Smith1yr
    Commented

    not gonna lie it is getting so boring sue being having to hide her identity for this long is ridiculous its played out for to long and I'm losing interest. the story is also getting way to predictable

    Some people in the business world especially wanted to participate in this grand event, but because they usually had nothing to do with the painting industry, they were not invited. They tried their best but could not get tickets. They could not help but sigh!
    Hidden Marriage: A Heaven-sent Billionaire Husband
    Urban · SuSuSu Ruyi
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  • Onica_Smith
    Onica_Smith1yr
    Commented

    I love the story but a little confused why we started out about su being and now reading about Lin wenyu

    Ch 1658 The Lin Family!
    Hidden Marriage: A Heaven-sent Billionaire Husband
    Urban · SuSuSu Ruyi
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  • Onica_Smith
    Onica_Smith1yr
    Commented

    August 19th is their anniversary

    The couple's wedding anniversary was fast approaching. Whenever Tangning thought about the previous year's August 15th, she believed that life was filled with surprises and miracles. If she had not been so courageous that day to suggest they got married, her life would have perhaps turned out very different and nowhere as fortunate as she was right now.
    Trial Marriage Husband: Need to Work Hard
    Urban · Passion Honey
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  • Onica_Smith
    Onica_Smith1yr
    Commented

    if they think Ting is powerful dealing with modeling stuff they should know he is even more powerful in dealing with acting stuff especially when it has to do with his own script

    Ch 312 Wifey, You Have Suffered
    Trial Marriage Husband: Need to Work Hard
    Urban · Passion Honey
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  • Onica_Smith
    Onica_Smith1yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

    Ch 206 Who Will You Get to be my Manager?
    Trial Marriage Husband: Need to Work Hard
    Urban · Passion Honey
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  • Onica_Smith
    Onica_Smith1yr
    Commented

    I love this saying I will actually keep this for my future Remembrances

    'A woman is a piece of a man's rib. When they hug, the rib finally returns home.'[2]
    Trial Marriage Husband: Need to Work Hard
    Urban · Passion Honey
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  • Onica_Smith
    Onica_Smith1yr
    Commented

    they kidney thi g doesn't show up this early in the original version

    Ch 30 Sharing the Stage with Mo Yurou
    Trial Marriage Husband: Need to Work Hard
    Urban · Passion Honey
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  • Onica_Smith
    Onica_Smith1yr
    Commented

    see this was mentioned to early takes the suspense out of what is to come

    Han Ruoxue gave two grunts of approval before hanging up the phone. She was both angry and felt helpless towards this brother.
    Trial Marriage Husband: Need to Work Hard
    Urban · Passion Honey
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  • Onica_Smith
    Onica_Smith1yr
    Commented

    there's a lot of description missing with the updates that have been done things are missing

    Ch 26 It Was All Small Attacks Before
    Trial Marriage Husband: Need to Work Hard
    Urban · Passion Honey
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  • Onica_Smith
    Onica_Smith1yr
    Commented

    what happened to the scene where they modeled together

    Ch 24 The Two Get Scolded, Tangning Benefits
    Trial Marriage Husband: Need to Work Hard
    Urban · Passion Honey
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  • Onica_Smith
    Onica_Smith1yr
    Commented

    second time reading I can tell it has been edited and changed a bit I'm hoping that it hasn't changed to much aside from the grammer fixes

    Ch 21 New Manager - Lin Wei
    Trial Marriage Husband: Need to Work Hard
    Urban · Passion Honey
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