yet another story on here that is completely without proof reading or editing. Yes it could be a great story, there is one problem, the author is an idiot, keeps writing himself into a corner then has to plot armor his way out with even more dumb shit. too much redundancy, sometimes 3-4 chapters in a row will be the same thing said over and over again, just to fill in words and stretch one chapter into 6 so they can charge more. this is why people are racist towards Asian people nowadays

that is nothing how this garbage story is .not slice of life at all, are you fucking dumb

except the author is a complete moron and the fact that you are here boosting this garbage means you are prolly an Asian fanboi, Yes it's a good story but it's written by a fucking idiot

Most stories on this site start the same, they are somewhere around good to decently written stories but then later they devolve into the MC make one dumb decision after another just to make certain events or situations happen. This story starts from the very beginning with the dumb. The entire story is based on stupid situations that make no sense and then the MC just going with the flow like a sheep instead of doing what anyone would do and turn the useless system off and go do real work to fix his situation. instead he just seems to be fine with being saddles with all this nonsense. Its only the fact that the author then had to immediately write in some plot armor to make things work properly. 5k chapters and it is all based entirely on nonsense from the beginning. LOl people here praising it like it's some masterpiece of literature.

what are you insane, this story is dumb from the first chapter. This entire story starts from one idiotic moment to the next and the whole story is based on a stupid concepts that make absolutely no sense. at least most stories on here start good and slowly move to the stupid ideas and stupid decisions from the MC this starts from moment one with stupid heaped on top of stupid

who cares, this shit is garbage and only a few people get that far anyways. only Chinese people will read this. the humor and the tropes and idioms would only make sense to them cause they are the only ones dumb enough to understand it

hello 50 cent monkey. you are obviously a payed Chinese trash bag

your obviously a little pink. you payed trolls are so easy to spot. this story is almost able to call itself garbage. if it was a little better it would be garbage, right now it's a flaming pile of shit and your a payed Asian retard

oh i went to your profile, I get it you are Israeli no wonder your a moron that explains everything

obviously your a payed troll, this is far from a perfect story. far from even a good story. wil be reporting you

Could be a good story, the problem is again just like every story here. the writer is trash. just a waste of time. filled from start to finish with so many Asian tropes and stereotypes that it is unreadable for white westeners. the "misunderstandings" are insane. the guy literally asked if the MC " has a dragon" and the responds by yelling at the guy and saying he's not a pervert wtf does that have to do with a dragon. only some idiot Chinese would get something that dumb

lol, you have to be Asian, that's literally the only way you would think this is good and mean it .anyone else who says it's good is either a moron or a troll. this is so stupid. this story is terrible. Filled to the brim with just dumb after dumb and the only way any of it makes sense is if your a dumbass Asian. all the stupid Asian tropes that make the characters look like literal retards

same garbage different title. Chinese people have no imagination. this story starts literally the same as like 100 other stories. Just like every other story on here, only the inane day to day stuff is written well. when you get to the complex and nuanced it's written by a mentally ill chimpanzee. also has pretty much every single Asian LN trope and stereotype imaginable. it's not worth reading in free sites let alone having to pay for it

lol, did you really say that Chinese authors are creative. what are you blind dumb or just a payed troll. they are the least creative and write some of the worst stories out there. every single story on this app is copy pasta garbage. they use the same tropes over and over. only 2 or 3 stories on here are original the rest are AI created nonsense

your an idiot stop dick riding, either you know it's garbage but you sucking dick to try to get it for free or you genuinely think it's good in which case you should stop....breathing that is your wasting oxygen

as a matter of fact I'm glad you have health issues, hope they do something about you being an absolute retard. the only well written part of your story is the inane shit that doesn't matter, the important shit would be written better by a 5yr old autistic monkey with only half a brain

go kill yourself, this shit is garbage and the fact you actually have the nerve to charge people for this. light yourself on fire

your obviously an idiotic fan boy. you should dick ride a lil harder I Don't think you finished him off yet. you think this story is good but that's because your dumb and the worst problem is that your so dumb you don't even realize it

well obviously you have no idea what great or even good writing is .you have got to be just another Asian fan boy. this is a good story with terrible writing and an idiotic author .this guy is fucking dumb. only the pointless everyday stuff in the story is decently written. when it comes to the important moments and events it's one big ball of dum decision making to make dumb situations happen . case in point the traitors chapters, that entire "arc" is wildly stupid. makes literally no sense. one person just going around doing all these impossible things right under everyone's nose while everyone, literally everyone is searching for and aware of their presence. but instead they just act like nothing's going on and take no precautions just do all this people could die to get to the spot the retard author wanted it. could have been done in ways that made even an ounce of sense but he is too stupid to understand that and then wants to charge people actual money for this garbage. I'm glad the guy has health problems. i hope this book never finishes .I hope more idiots like you keep wasting money on this trash, because your too fucking dumb to know good writing.

This is a story that has the potential to be Great. there is just one problem, the idiot writing it. Most of the story is pretty decently written. When you get to any of the important matters, it's just one dumb decision after another just to make a certain situation happen to get to an end goal. the problem is the absolute potato writing to get there. All the inane everyday stuff he writes pretty well. Anything that takes even an iota of brain power is beyond him. it makes everything preceding the event based on stupid shit. Would be wildly different and better if written by a component person, or someone with even 1/3 of a brain