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DaoistOUdfGt12dCommentedCh 1163 Making A Family Part 1- DaoistOUdfGt8mthPosted
- DaoistOUdfGt10mthCommentedCh 154 A Demoness On Fire
- DaoistOUdfGt10mthCommentedCh 154 A Demoness On Fire
- DaoistOUdfGt1yrCommentedCh 56 Back to where it all began
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Thanks, i love the novel
[N/A: Positions details. Here] - DaoistOUdfGt1yrCommentedCh 270 The First Step
- DaoistOUdfGt1yrCommentedCh 70 [Rachel] Wait! Don't come in!
- DaoistOUdfGt1yrCommentedCh 1146 Mages
- DaoistOUdfGt1yrCommentedCh 1138 Nexus
- DaoistOUdfGt1yrPosted
please, that emery and klea were together bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb bbbb b b b b b b b b b
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esta muy bueno pero agrupa mas las cosas a veces se confunde una idea y otra se ve que usas punto para acabar una idea pero seria mejor que no separaras todo
recuperarte. Cuidado, está caliente —dijo cuidadosamente Xia Zhi, ubicando el tazón - DaoistOUdfGt2yrCommented
esta bueno y aparte el gore no es tan incomodo en la imaginacion sin experiencia visual asi que nunca se imaginaria de verdad el verdadero gore a no ser que hayas vistos algo mas espantoso de lo que pusiste
[N/A: If you're not a fan of "gore" don't hesitate to tell me, this is my first book so I can't quite find the limit to satisfy everyone. On the other hand it will not always happen like that, I specify that the context was particular (prisoners of war, interrogation etc ). Thank you !] - DaoistOUdfGt2yrCommented
y que esten desconfiados o que se vea asi
"You seem to respect her unconditionally judging by your speech. Is her goal to protect this forest ? If so, I think that me and Persea here will have no problem pledging allegiance to her when she returns." - DaoistOUdfGt2yrCommented
en la parte donde caipy comienza ha hablar creo que seria mejor que pongas con tono confiado o que confian en hecha y en la parte de "pareces respetar" no seria mejor ponerlo en forma de pregunta y nixia reponde
"You seem to respect her unconditionally judging by your speech. Is her goal to protect this forest ? If so, I think that me and Persea here will have no problem pledging allegiance to her when she returns."