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  • Xedron
    Xedron1d
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    I had a thought, what if you created a minion-type jutsu somewhere down the line. Kind of like that of a puppet, however doesn't require strings. Mostly through the mind. Also thank you for the chapters! ^_^

    Ch 24 Four Generations in Person
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  • Xedron
    Xedron2d
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    Hmmm, I don't know why but I can't help but get the feeling that Irina's in a bit of self denial on her feelings. 🤔 course I could be wrong on that. I wonder if they ever do end up reach that point between the two of them. Unless they have set paths for each other to take. Regardless, thank you for the mass release! ^_^

    Ch 114 Chapter 114: Could This Spread Rumors?!
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  • Xedron
    Xedron6d
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    Oho.. How interesting for there to be two nine tails almost like minato's other half. I wonder if Chikage will get a unique element from this ninetails. If it's wind then you could see a possible kekkei genkai form later on. But I truly look forward to seeing how this journey leads for him. ^_^ especially when it's possible for him to have just about stolen kushina's heart instead of minato.

    Ch 3 chapter 3 Uchiha Chikage
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    Naruto: Being Pursued by Kushina
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  • Xedron
    Xedron6d
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    Thank you for the chapter! I quite find this story to be creative. Though I can't help but wonder a few things.. 1: is this during the beginning of the era alongside rocks d. Xebec and Gol. D Roger? Or when they are already up there in terms of standing? 2: will the crew be based on quality over quantity or will you be gathering up the supposed "commanders" first before gathering up some fodder to use? 3: Will there perhaps be more devil fruits to see in the future? I honestly quite look forward to seeing how you'll do on them on this journey. ^_^

    Ch 13 Chapter 13
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    Inferno’s Ascension
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  • Xedron
    Xedron12d
    Replied to Nevermore101

    Ahh okay, thank you for answering my question. I couldn't help but be curious on it since it feels like he could be able to benefit greatly from some of the events and get even more good cards.

    Ch 7 Adjusting the plan
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    The New Duel King
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  • Xedron
    Xedron12d
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    Thank you for the chapter! I wonder how close iruna and Lynn will go. (Maybe even end up developing some feelings. o3o) But I am also looking forward to seeing how everyone develops. ^_^

    Ch 84 Chapter 84: Bowtruckle and the Scandinavian Mountains
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  • Xedron
    Xedron12d
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    Thank you for the chapter! I must say this is quite the interesting change of scene and a breath of fresh air to see someone actually manipulate kaiba. I wonder if you'll give Darwin a love interest, as well as a possible place amongst yugi's friends. Or will you be using him as a possible side character that would take advantage of the plots that happen? 🤔 I also wonder how you'll keep his deck(s) updated with the money he'll get from the tournaments. Considering at that storyline there aren't alot of support-like monsters to really help.

    Ch 7 Adjusting the plan
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    The New Duel King
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  • Xedron
    Xedron13d
    Commented

    Truthfully I don't see any reason to touch artorias. Mordred I feel deserves a chance to find a real place for herself. As she had an unfortunate path alongside her previous master. It is only right that she is given a more better path plus she is truly skilled and would get along with mash better than artorias.

    Ch 78 Question
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    THE MULTIVERSE: GAMER PATH
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  • Xedron
    Xedron13d
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    I wonder if Ren is able to recruit Rob Lucci and the other members of CP9.

    Ch 54 CH52 Arriving At Water 7!!!
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    I Quit The Straw Hats And Became Yamato's Fiancee
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  • Xedron
    Xedron14d
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    Thank you for the chapter! I cant wait to see what other crew mates you'll find- though I assume this is an alternate-like universe where Kuina survived? I also wonder if you'll be planning on giving him quality over quantity or do you plan on making some regular goons for him to have along with the more stronger and higher ranking members? One last question.. Do you perhaps plan on recruiting some of the villains under Damien too?

    Ch 11 First Crewmates
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  • Xedron
    Xedron20d
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    Thank you for the amazing chapters! I wonder if he'll end up creating his own organization consisting of villains and possible protagonists. 🤔 but I absolutely love this idea of compiling numerous villain-like templates to display a man who has morals that falls in the gray line of both good and evil.

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Strong Being doesn't need an excuse
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  • Xedron
    Xedron20d
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    Thank you for the amazing chapter! I truly look forward to seeing how far you go with this system as well as what you'll be doing in terms of his crew. Since there numerous paths he can take. Though I do have some questions out of curiousity. 1. Did he meet ace and Sabo yet or is that in a future date?(perhaps even recruit one of them into his crew.- possibility.) 2. Do you plan to give him a devil fruit or do you perhaps plan on randomizing it so that way he can try to learn the ropes of it and go from there? 3. Do you perhaps plan on giving him different methods of combating and perhaps even combine different aspects of combat(like combining rankyaku with his sword styles if he plans on getting into it.) I truly look forward to seeing how this series goes. ^_^

    Ch 5 Rokushiki
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  • Xedron
    Xedron21d
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    Thank you for the amazing chapter! I must say, that is quote an interesting concept you gave for him. Is he to be a Gojo type of character and perhaps you could make him into some level of hybrid depending on how you train him. I also like the blend of comedy you gave him. I truly look forward to seeing how you go about putting him on his journey. Though I assume the arlecchino and Moana could be possible love interests?

    Ch 10 Andrius.
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  • Xedron
    Xedron21d
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    Thank you for the chapter! I find this to be quite a unique style of a system. Though could it be that the devil fruit users that are resurrected to retain their devil fruit abilities and the experiences and memories he gets from the shadows.. Could he be able to retain some of their abilities too? Or is it of course only through his own efforts? Especially if he can get his own devil fruit and learn the rokushiki just to give some examples? Perhaps even use the higher ranking shadows as a means to learn more charismatic-like abilities and perhaps leadership.

    Ch 14 Bandit Encounter
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    I HAVE A SHADOW ARMY IN ONE PIECE
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  • Xedron
    Xedron24d
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    Thank you for the chapter! I'm happy that raiden may be able to find some friends for herself. Though I wonder if he's gonna become one of those.. "childhood crushes" kind of role. Lol so I can't help but feel he may end up becoming the wedge between the Kiana and raiden or maybe he'll end up becoming the love interest of the two. Lol

    Ch 2 Getting Along With Raiden Mei
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    Honkai: The Reincarnated One
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  • Xedron
    Xedron27d
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    Thank you for the chapter! Though I have to say.. I truly love this idea! Plus there could be a possibility of utilizing this skill as a means to having multiple devil fruit powers as well as gaining other skills from physique level skills, sword skills, gun skills, etc! Truly hope you are able to keep this up so that way we can see a guy truly breaking the norms. ^_^

    Ch 5 Kage Kage no mi
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  • Xedron
    Xedron28d
    Commented

    I wonder if he'll be able to see the statuses of his opponents as well as his subordinates(excluding the fodder minions that he probably will have as he would most likely be an enemy to luffy too.)

    Ch 4 The True Beginning
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  • Xedron
    Xedron1mth
    Commented

    I'm curious if you'll give him excellent leadership skills as well as charisma so that way he can lead the marine soldiers well when he reaches the appropriate rank. Of course it would help with the experience if he does decide to leave the marines at some point.

    Ch 17 Chapter 15 - Foundational Marine Class
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  • Xedron
    Xedron1mth
    Commented

    Thank you for the chapter. However I do like this interaction, this eas a character who died before she had the chance to really show the world what she is made of. Why not have her join him on his journey either as a fellow crew mate or a potential love interest(I mean sure there are plenty of options out there but yknow.)

    Ch 13 Chapter 11 - Kuina's Struggle
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  • Xedron
    Xedron1mth
    Replied to justadudewithapen

    I see, I look forward to seeing that! I also look forward to seeing what worthy compatriot or subordinates you'll give him as he adventures down his path. You could very well make him like luffy, a pirate who has a specific way of life and a type of compass. Or perhaps make him a pirate who does the usual pirate thing like looting but of course.. compass piece since I'm sure that skrilly guy put some level of trauma/rage in the poor soul.

    Ch 11 AN
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