uhhh this will be good. advanced spellcraftung, fights, hints about khans condition and some side politics

yep, some people here really hate on monica interrupting the action. i say it helps khan grow as a character so i like it. i also like her character but id like to see her expand past support. it was really sad seeing june alwa,s stay behind noah

khan winning over the hard to get guy

id like more things khan specific, as in chaos or some other theme. right now khan has a lot of jumbled up abilities, that may work together but arent exactly working as one. he needs a botds type deal like how noah combined all his abilities under his concept of ... whatever it was,i forgot

very very nice, youre amazing at writing fights

well maybe this will allow khan to lose with grace, its a bit over the top that he has to keep up an image of beein unbeatable. though i suspect it will end in either a draw or an unknown option c that will see the abassadors goal und khans fulfilled. the abassador will scold khan but accept that cans solution was good

i liked it, more fights than i expected and though a lot, still bearable romance. i just hope for more deeper development of khans powers rather than just plain power

hey eve, just wanted to say i really liked emonic sword amd equally enjoy chaos. what i liked in particular was noahs research, like for body fusing, his heart, his lungs, spells, his world etc. id really like to see khan do more of this than just spells. maybe after breaking through 100%mana into evolved human: with there maybe beeing no set path.. or he could embrace his inhumanity and maybe more than just nak, fuse with more extremely good aliens to become a superior species? id love to see what you come up with. godspeed

khan finally decides the kind of leader he wants to be

yeah but that means their family cant be dumb. surely they will see his potential and accept his relationship, if not even marry him off to her, to keep a potentially very import figuere. plus such high rank familys surely know his dad

i think khan might habe enough indirect merits to just date monica in the open now

would love if noahs uni or multi versal influence expanded the hive to giant proportions

if i wanted normal soap opera id watch tv or read cliche love novels. its one thing to suggest a direction to an author and anotzer to demand he change entirely, especially if a big amount of people ejoy what he does currently. i know i do. and i hate romance. but this is still fun because of how weird it is, its definetly more bearable than other romance. though, and this ill grant you, im in dire need for some morr proper action now, but i also know this arc wont offer much of that, and i accept that

eve i just wanna say i really like the novel, even better than demonic sword ^^

God damnit Author. You got me hooked on that good stuff. This doesn't feel like a web novel, more like a nice good proper novel like Lord of the Rings or Stormlight Chronikles. I just read the end of book 2 and let me tell you. Im in awe. The guy actually weaved all the small unimportant detaild added over time together into an aweinspiring, melanchalic, sad brutal plot that left me wanting for more. If he stays even remotely near that level this will be a masterpiece. SPOILER: I'll be damned if Neph is dead. I would wager the guess that she somehow growes past sleeper limits, since if she stayed in te Dreams limits she wouldn't be able to destroy it, she has such main character syndrome that she is gonna do a Noah Belvan or Noah Osmont. However so hear me god if she is dead or Sunny doesn't become her Shadow in the end i WILL drop this. Keep the good job up Author, this was by far my read of the year. And i read Supreme Magus, Crazy Lich and Demonic Sword this year. You've got what it takes!!

i have concern for that mind of yours eve. i like it

the spirit is willing but the flesh is spongy and weak

noah might really be destined to reverse the collapse of the main reality

zoreth maybe but not bytra. also if this really was aplanned then definietly not with vastors knowledge

yeah higher power levels near concepts sadly often lose the nuance of a "normal" fight and devolve into influence/willpower fights. which CAN be very good, since they add the element of emotion that makes it interesting BUT a bit of nuance is needed as well