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Ephemerality

Ephemerality

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Writer of fantasy and scifi novels

2021-05-18 JoinedGlobal
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  • Ephemerality
    Ephemerality2yr
    Commented

    LOL playing dead in front of a necromancer xD

    "Don't pretend to be dead in front of me!"
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    Only I Am a Necromancer
    Fantasy · Jijumjang
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  • Ephemerality
    Ephemerality2yr
    Commented

    Wait what? XD I don’t get it

    'In any case, it is a great synergy. By the way, doesn't muscle strength increase because of bones with no flesh?' Sungwoo thought to himself.
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    Only I Am a Necromancer
    Fantasy · Jijumjang
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  • Ephemerality
    Ephemerality2yr
    Commented

    Bahaha Hanho’s parents are adorable…xD

    Jongho Lee, Hanho's father, argued that it was all thanks to his experience with the Go-Stop games that he could draw the "Pioneer" card in a timely manner. He added that it was his worst mistake in his life that he didn't teach his son how to play Go-Stop games early on.
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    Only I Am a Necromancer
    Fantasy · Jijumjang
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  • Ephemerality
    Ephemerality2yr
    Commented

    I don’t get it either xD

    "Oh my God! How can you say that to your parents, son!"
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    Only I Am a Necromancer
    Fantasy · Jijumjang
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  • Ephemerality
    Ephemerality2yr
    Commented

    This is the symbol of Balshar, God of Alchemy and Creation :) (Also, if you didn't know, a map and other images will also be posted on my discord. The link is in the synopsis if y'all want to join!)

    Finally, Alan finished, sheathing his dagger and taking off his necklace. Hanging from a heavy silver chain was a pendant of a crescent moon encircling two inlaid gems of ruby and sapphire. Fleur recognized it: the divine symbol of Balshar, god of alchemy and creation.
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    Immortal Desire
    Fantasy · Ephemerality
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  • Ephemerality
    Ephemerality2yr
    Posted

    Bahaha! A hilarious read, unique twist to the reincarnation trope too. (Heh. Poor MC XD) Definitely has lots of potential, and I'm looking forward to more. Seems like it's going to be a fun ride

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    I Reincarnated 84 million times!
    Fantasy · WuxiFan
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  • Ephemerality
    Ephemerality2yr
    Commented

    Mounds of trEasures = jUst hoArd, especIally for draGons

    I didn't know this first, but as more and more fools ventured into my cave, my mounds of treasures increased. So I tacitly agreed to her arrangement.
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    I Reincarnated 84 million times!
    Fantasy · WuxiFan
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  • Ephemerality
    Ephemerality2yr
    Replied to WuxiFan

    Mmmmm not valid English though according to the dictionary?

    I went through thousands of incarnations, sometimes as an animate, other times as an inanimate.
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    I Reincarnated 84 million times!
    Fantasy · WuxiFan
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  • Ephemerality
    Ephemerality2yr
    Replied to WuxiFan

    Yep, it’s just, animate and inanimate are adjectives, so you need some kind of noun after that

    I went through thousands of incarnations, sometimes as an animate, other times as an inanimate.
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    I Reincarnated 84 million times!
    Fantasy · WuxiFan
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  • Ephemerality
    Ephemerality2yr
    Commented

    her one more—> yet another of

    She was regaling me with the story of her one more failed match-up.
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    I Reincarnated 84 million times!
    Fantasy · WuxiFan
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  • Ephemerality
    Ephemerality2yr
    Commented

    Animate—> living creature, inanimate—> inanimate objects

    I went through thousands of incarnations, sometimes as an animate, other times as an inanimate.
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    I Reincarnated 84 million times!
    Fantasy · WuxiFan
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  • Ephemerality
    Ephemerality2yr
    Commented

    Once, I knew him not. Now, I see him everywhere… 🤣🤣

    "This... This is f*cking delicious!"
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    I Reincarnated 84 million times!
    Fantasy · WuxiFan
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  • Ephemerality
    Ephemerality2yr
    Commented

    XD he seems so cool with dying. Did he die alot before? Not much reaction, seems ready to move on hahaha

    As I sat up, I felt the ethereal experience of leaving my body. Slowly I floated up and looked down at my soulless corpse. With a last military salute towards the land of my birth, I turned and began my journey into reincarnation.
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    I Reincarnated 84 million times!
    Fantasy · WuxiFan
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  • Ephemerality
    Ephemerality2yr
    Commented

    “, and” the starry nights

    I could feel the hubbub around me quieten. The colorful city lights lost their luster as the starry night sky was all that was left in my vision.
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    I Reincarnated 84 million times!
    Fantasy · WuxiFan
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  • Ephemerality
    Ephemerality2yr
    Commented

    Quiet* or quieted* can also be used as a verb (and is more common). Honestly never seen quieten used before

    I could feel the hubbub around me quieten. The colorful city lights lost their luster as the starry night sky was all that was left in my vision.
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    I Reincarnated 84 million times!
    Fantasy · WuxiFan
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  • Ephemerality
    Ephemerality2yr
    Commented

    Bahaha love Monn

    Monn did not want to take this job when he thought of the scene where the demonic beasts would riot at night, and he had to work overtime, and said decisively, "I refuse to accept that task!"
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    As A Cardinal, I Don't Do Overtime
    Fantasy · Southsky Star
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  • Ephemerality
    Ephemerality2yr
    Posted

    Oh wow, the worldbuilding! And the characters! Pulled me in from the start. Nice and gritty, and I can sense the complex world already. This is an interesting read for sure! Can't wait to read more. :)

    altalt
    Drip Work
    Fantasy · TaintedMetal
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  • Ephemerality
    Ephemerality2yr
    Commented

    Period after sighed, not comma. Also "had been generous enough" not "was generous enough" since he already has the newspaper

    The Representative sighed, he was going to have a lot of work this year. He took out a newspaper from his coat. He was generous enough to give the kid selling the papers a couple of bucks. The Representative's eyes locked onto one of the paper's headlines, also written in bold and capitalized letters. The letters were deeply drenched in black ink.
    altalt
    Drip Work
    Fantasy · TaintedMetal
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  • Ephemerality
    Ephemerality2yr
    Commented

    Was a bit confused at this paragraph, maybe add single quotes to show thoughts (because WN doesn't have italics.... 😩)Also maybe, "are still corrupted"?

    Even after the war was finished 4 years ago, people are corrupted by their own ideas and theories, the Representative thought, put them into practice and bingo, they've made themselves into a demon. He put back his binoculars, and proceeded to take out the note he got from the Gunsmith.
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    Drip Work
    Fantasy · TaintedMetal
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  • Ephemerality
    Ephemerality2yr
    Commented

    Within in --> Just Within And maybe "a" instead of "the" street. Also "with his tie..." --> "and his tie shone a proud red."

    Within in the street full of busybodies there stood a suited man. His clothes were elegant and tidy, darker than night, with his tie shining proudly in red. He stood on top of an apartment building, where the fresh wind greeted him, and the overall view failed to capture his attention. In his hands were binoculars, and he saw the sight gangster Lloyd Howitzer being tortured yet again by Bright.
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    Drip Work
    Fantasy · TaintedMetal
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